Nov 29, 2010

PROMISE..!!!


"Dad…Why did Mamma go to God??" She asked him standing in front of her mother's grave.

He almost broke into tears hearing his five years old little girl ask about her mother.

“Angel, God isn’t good in English no. That’s why mom has gone to teach Him. She is the best teacher in this world to teach Him, so you should be proud of your mother” he was almost dying to stop his tears flowing down.

“Daddy”

“Yes Angel”

“Daddy, God isn’t good with mathematics also. But please promise me that you will not go to teach Him”

He was just looking at her.

“Daddy, I know you are the best Mathematics teacher in the world.”
He found himself crying already.

“Because I can learn English without mom but Daddy, Mathematics is very difficult. The problems are very tough you know.”

“I will not leave my Angel. I promise.”

Written for Thursday Tales..!!!


10 comments:

Pramoda Meduri said...

Hi Dear... thats soo touching an innocent love..well written...

Yamini Meduri said...

@Pramoda

thank you di..!!

George S Batty said...

your story tugs at the strings of my heart. how difficult for a child to lose a parent and how wonderful to turn it into a helping hand for god.

nice writing

Yamini Meduri said...

@gs batty

thank you dear :)

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-nature-plants-creatures.html

Dear poet, welcome join Jingle Poetry Potluck…
First time participants can link in old poems, or poems unrelated to our theme…
We value your contribution and cherish your talent!
Hope to see you soon,
xxx



love your work...
keep it up.
:)

Yamini Meduri said...

@Morning

thanks dear..for welcoming to the Pot Luck poetry...love to be there..!!1

will submit mine soon..!!!

Tarang Sinha said...

A very touching and innocent story.

Caspar said...

Clap! Clap! Clap!
Yamini this is a huge accolade for you.
I cant' say anything more in words. :)
Very nicely written.

Rahul: http://rahulmyzone.blogspot.com

Tan said...

Reading you after a long time...
..touched!!

RaNiiiiii said...

a touching short story.. i liked it!!