Oct 23, 2010

HUMMING


Heartfelt lovely tunes
Uttering special souls
Merge together there
Mesmerizing audience around
In joy musicians
Notes made tunes
Grow high morale

Written for Acrostic Only..!!!

2 comments:

Lost in thoughts said...

nice humming

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

I like your concept, and this one has great potential. Sometimes when we are tying to follow the word limits of a particular prompt, it can take away from our creativity. If you don't mind I would like to play with this, just to give you a few options ....

"heartfelt tunes
uttering sounds
merging souls
(or) spirits
mesmerizing audience
in explicit joy
notes from heaven
generate high morale"


... as you can see, I simply changed around some words, added a couple for clarity, and the words "grow" and "generate" means the same.