The day I respired
She fete her existence
Enjoyed her warmth
I did celebrate too
From a little seed
To a grape size I grew
She felt my heart beat
Fondled my presence
From a sweet grape
To a plum size I grew
My eyes are formed
I move, but she didn’t feel it
I am sculpted carefully
With her love, her blood
She caressed each moment
Enjoying me within her
I cuddle to comfort myself
She cries in happiness
Feels my moment
I celebrate my mother
I am pink soft and light
I hear her voice now
She talked to me every day
Her voice is music
Its time to meet her
I fancy her image
The most beautiful
My mother, I am curious to see
I get ready to be born
Into the real world
I try to get out
She cried in pain
With pain I came out
To open eyes I am curious
But the light is bright
I cant see her well
Now I see her everyday
Celebrating me, my birth
She is special as I opined
Even today after 23 years
Written for Sunday Scribblings...!!!
19 comments:
yam would you mind me remaning in silence?Some huge experiences can't be expressed in 26 alphabets.....amazing....wauh ...wauh...!!!
Beautiful!! :)
Amazing work, this has captured life so well. Thank you for sharing!
@chandu
thanks ra...i understand ur silence...after all we are best friends dude..!!!
@Gauri
thanks babes..!!!
@LeiffyV
thank you dear..thanks for inspiring through SS..!!!
welcome to my Land of Dreams..!!
She is special for you for ever
Beautiful take on the prompt!
Its really awesome...u've done a great job..!!!!!!!Hope even though those words aren't enough to describe the god....
what a nice poem on growing up.. and I mean it literally.. you worded every phase here! :)
I'll echo Chandu's comment.. some poems can't be praised with words from dictionary..
That was an awesome poem ra...
beautiful.:)
@KParthasarathi
thank you dear...she is defly special forever to me..!!!
@Anacronk
thank you dear ....welcome to my land of dreams..!!!
@Udaya
rightly said..no words are enough to describe her..thank you dear..!!!
welcome to my land of dreams..!!
@Leo
thanks a ton yaar...your words mean a lot to me..!!!
@My college life
thanks chaitu..!!!
@Sneha
thank you dear..!!!
its jus awesome nd speechless
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