This does not define ill wind, but the first line is a great beginning."Inauspicious means "not favorable", you could have researched this definition, as this is what "ill wind" means ....The last line is good too, but you should use the simple version of this word "die".Now in-between the words,"Inauspicious" and "die" you should tell us why?
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This does not define ill wind, but the first line is a great beginning.
"Inauspicious means "not favorable", you could have researched this definition, as this is what "ill wind" means ....
The last line is good too, but you should use the simple version of this word "die".
Now in-between the words,
"Inauspicious" and "die" you should tell us why?
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