Oct 24, 2010


Sweet smiles they wear
Wear ragged clothes
clothes that we donate
donate some love too

Too hard life they live
live punishments they face
face still innocent and calm
calm their pain we ought

Ought to beautify their life
life special we shall make
make their odds away
away from pain, lets bring

Bring them God's grace
grace them our love
love changes lives
lives immersed in pain

Pain suffering kids
kids we call orphans
orphans kids of Thy
Thy sent us to care them

Written for One Single Impression..!!!


Ramesh Sood said...

What a beautiful loop poem.. very compassionate and indeed we must care.. Gos is so gracious..

Harshad mehta said...

Beautiful compassionate thought. Well put in words.

Ms.Meduri said...

@Ramesh Sood

thank you dear..!!!

Ms.Meduri said...

@Harshad Mehta

thank you friend..!!! welcome to my Land of Dreams..!!!

SandyCarlson said...

They welcome us into their hearts despite their hardships. This is grace. May we learn it and live it.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Lovely! Your words are inspiring, and I like how you took the last word of each line and used it as the start of the next one.

Anonymous said...

An outstanding entry. A deep bow in respect of your writing. Please have a good new week.

daily athens

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

their faces tell me that they already know God's grace...


Ms.Meduri said...

@Sandy Carlson

Rightly said dear..!! Thank you for sharing..!!!

Ms.Meduri said...

@Sweetest in the gale

thank you dear..this form of poetry is called LOOP POETRY..n its fun doing it..try it and have fun..!!!

Ms.Meduri said...


thank you dear...thanks a ton..!! Have a great week too.!!!

Ms.Meduri said...

@Rene/ Not The Rockefellers

thank you dear...God's grace always there..our grace they are in need of..!!!

gautami tripathy said...

I like loop poetry. I call those dancing verses!!

an ode

And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday
mornings and thereafter!

Amity said...

a beautiful well-penned but poignant loop poem Yami!

if everyone could only care!