Sweet smiles they wearWear ragged clothes
clothes that we donate
donate some love too
Too hard life they live
live punishments they face
face still innocent and calm
calm their pain we ought
Ought to beautify their life
life special we shall make
make their odds away
away from pain, lets bring
Bring them God's grace
grace them our love
love changes lives
lives immersed in pain
Pain suffering kids
kids we call orphans
orphans kids of Thy
Thy sent us to care them
Written for One Single Impression..!!!
14 comments:
What a beautiful loop poem.. very compassionate and indeed we must care.. Gos is so gracious..
Beautiful compassionate thought. Well put in words.
@Ramesh Sood
thank you dear..!!!
@Harshad Mehta
thank you friend..!!! welcome to my Land of Dreams..!!!
They welcome us into their hearts despite their hardships. This is grace. May we learn it and live it.
Lovely! Your words are inspiring, and I like how you took the last word of each line and used it as the start of the next one.
An outstanding entry. A deep bow in respect of your writing. Please have a good new week.
daily athens
their faces tell me that they already know God's grace...
beautiful
@Sandy Carlson
Rightly said dear..!! Thank you for sharing..!!!
@Sweetest in the gale
thank you dear..this form of poetry is called LOOP POETRY..n its fun doing it..try it and have fun..!!!
@pomttept
thank you dear...thanks a ton..!! Have a great week too.!!!
@Rene/ Not The Rockefellers
thank you dear...God's grace always there..our grace they are in need of..!!!
I like loop poetry. I call those dancing verses!!
an ode
And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday
mornings and thereafter!
a beautiful well-penned but poignant loop poem Yami!
if everyone could only care!
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