waiting for the special time
time thats for sure there
there i stand, alone for you
you bring me life, i'm aware
aware of the life ahead with you
you are the truth i tend to live with
with the love you share
share a spark of hope that you lit
lit the lamp called life
life thats dark till date
date today will be forever
forever you changed my fate
fate i never believed in
in smiles or in tough time
time you brought to me, for it
it is special, so here is a toast of wine
wine of love and joy
joy of life with you my friend
friend of my little heart
heart's beat without you will end...!!!
a new form of poetry again....this form is called loop poetry....where the last word of a line is used to the start the next one...and the rhyming goes in ABCB order....and here goes my first attempt...i am not sure if its come out good....but then, i hope its fine...!!!
Let me know any kind of changes that i should do to it...or any kind of suggestion to improve it...every advice, every suggestion is accepted..not just for this one...for all the dreams seen in my Land Of Dreams..!!!
18 comments:
Its really interesting genius.
I had never read such a poem before.
Its a innovative form of poetry.
Good work yaar.
Regards
Satyajit
loop poetry interesting ...well i never tried it before but its simply marvelous :)...good job :)..
urs..hemu..
hello..is anybody there??
hey yamini..nope visits at my blogs?? kinda busy?
hey
this loop poetry is interesting!
and u have done it well..
kewl
cheers
swetha
Beautiful blog that you have here..Got to know your blog through Writer's Lounge & Hemu..Will drop by whenever free.God bless ya' :)
its intersting i hv not hrd of ths kind of poetry..thank u for..enlighten us with ths new klind of thing...
n its really beautiful...
You are really passionate about poetry Yamini to be trying out so many variants of it! :) Good job!
u r one of d best poets on blogsville...n u have mastered all kinds...this one again is a masterpiece...
@The Jaggernut
thanks yaar...!!
@Hemanth
thanks yaar..!!!
@Prajyot
found me???
@Swetha
thanks buddy..!!
@Nithz
thanks friend...come back...!!!
have a great time in my Land of Dreams..!!!
@Pallav
thank you dear..!!!
@Dhanya
thanks yaar...i love to write and so, here is my work...!!!
@Mayz
thanks a ton Mayank...these words of urs made my day..!!
i am honored...thanks buddy..!!
this new way of writing was really gudd yam......
keep rockingggg
@Sukku
thanks buddy..!!
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