For ever, for everyone it is open
Road to it leads to the world of smiles
In it is the ocean of love
Establishing this new world, are we
Never let it down, we are working for
Develop the desire to join, should others
Shower on them, the joy of life
Heaven of happiness, we shall show them
Inspire the other worlds to be like us
Paradise of joy, lets build..!!!
Road to it leads to the world of smiles
In it is the ocean of love
Establishing this new world, are we
Never let it down, we are working for
Develop the desire to join, should others
Shower on them, the joy of life
Heaven of happiness, we shall show them
Inspire the other worlds to be like us
Paradise of joy, lets build..!!!
23 comments:
yami, i got two words for u!
"just brilliant".
loved the words so much... u r getting super at acrostic! :)
ps: loved the pic too! :P ;)
yay i am first! :D
as phoenix would have said!
second and third too! :D :D
hmmm....that was so special yamm...its even differenttt........
today is special day to both of us and still more special with ru poem dear.....
did u vote ?
and u dont bizit me :(
I wonder how you write like this!
So nice!
Paradise of joy, lets build..!!!
beautiful lines
@leo
hehehe so you have been noticing eh?? :)
Friendship so well defined yet so simple. :)
You defined friendship beautifully with this poem, Yamini. Truer words have never been spoken :)
a very beautiful and unique definition of friendship :)
good work :)
@Leo
thanks vinay...i am delighted...!!!
@Leo
congos on being the first..!!!
@Leo
yeah..you are the second and third too...congos..!!!
Phoenix is late..!!!
@Sukku
thanks ra..!!!
yeah a special day for both of us..i am very very very happy today..!!!
@Sam
i dint vote...i dint get my Voter ID..!!!
@Meera
the beautiful ppl around me help me write like this....one of the many is you...so thanks dear.!!!
@Phoenix
thanks dear.!!!
@Phoenix
vinay notices every one yaar..!!!
@Harshita
thanks buddy..!!!
@Dhanya
thanks dear..!!!
@Lena
thanks friend..!!
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