Apr 28, 2009

NEVER LEAVE ME..!!!


you shared my secrets, my joy
you listened my lies, my faults
you saw my triumphs, my fears
you are my strength, my weakness

you cheered me up, when i was low
you shared your shoulder, when i cried
you remained silent, when i spoke
you adviced me the best, when i needed

you identify my thoughts, the inner me
you understand my feelings, my little life
you spoke to my heart, my soul
you had faith in me, so did i

i love to be in this little world
of love, that you showed
never leave me here, to see the
world of sorrow and hatred

Dear friend, i admire your presence
in my little life, which you made special
Dont leave me here all alone
i fear i may not live anymore..!!!


another poem done: Love you Dad..!!! check out..!!!

20 comments:

Vinay said...

i wont leave u!
i think i would be dead if i ever left u friend! :)

ur so much more brilliant when u are not caged by format or style! it shows..! glad u still trying style though! :)

best was the third verse! :)

yamini meduri said...

@Vinay

thanks yaar....i am free if i am nto with any style...so i prefer writing like that....!!!

but then...i want to try something new...so i try to rhyme...but its just getting better i guess.....agreed???

sukku said...

ayayoooo......

dont worry yam..... i dont leave uu....

cozz a small ghost cannot go alone without a big ghost... nd thats uu naa... so how can i leave uu????

hehehehehhehee

yamini meduri said...

@sukku

hahaha....i will not leave you dont worry....i kow you a small kid..you cant walk alone with out someone big like me...!!!

so dont worry ok..!!!

sukku said...

i am not small kid ... :-|

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

u know i am a very big ghostttttt :)

yamini meduri said...

@Sukku

nee bondha neeku antha scene ledu....lite teesuko..!!!

ninnu chooste chinna pillalu kuda bhayapadaru..nuvvu ghost enti??

anavasaram ga maa ghosts paruvu teeyamaka artham ayinda???

Dhanya said...

Your friends will alwaysss be there for you Yamz!! :) :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

friendship never leaves...i only know this ...:)..

urs..hemu..

yamini meduri said...

@Dhanya

thanks dear...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Hemanth

thanks Dear....Friends also dont leave...i will prove this to u...!!!

Chriz said...

dads are the best.. they are the best friend anyone can get

yamini meduri said...

@Chirz

thanks dear....yeah u r right...!!!

Dads are the best and my dad is one such best friend..!!

Pallav said...

Honestly speaking there r very few peopl who know meaning of friendship, i think people become friends to just have some favor from u...
this is beautiful...
n i wish no one...leaves.. u...n they shld not because u r such a lovely person..

intersting poem..which reminded me somethng...
hv fun ... cheers :)

Pallav

yamini meduri said...

@Pallav

thanks yaar..!!!

u r true there are many who pretend to be friends but who actually expect something from us...i am glad that i dont have anyone like that...!!!

and the poem reminded u of something?? hope its something good and happy time..!!!

V. Archana said...

very nice :)

yamini meduri said...

@V.Archana

thanks yaar....welcome back...we missed u..!!!

tulipspeaks said...

well.. u hv me here! :)


ammu.

yamini meduri said...

@tulips

thanks yaar..!!

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

I love your admiration and i slow liked your way of expressing your incompleteness with out your friend...( friends i suppose )

Friends don't really leave na yamini... its the turns that life takes..makes this changes in life..:)

I liked this one too..:)

Cheers....

yamini meduri said...

@Mahesh

thanks da..!!!

friends never leave...they are always at heart but then, we miss them.!!!