Apr 27, 2009

DEAR YOU ARE THE BEST..!!!

The air you filled in
in the balloon of my life
life that was empty and dark
dark soul i turned to be

be it for any reason, i was there
there in the world alone, i wait
wait to see you, my friend
friend, you become my trait

trait i wish to share
share the joy and fun
fun of life, joy of heart
heart of happiness, you have spun

spun the threads of love
love thats special born in you
you are the real friend my dear
dear, you are the best out of the very few..!!!


19 comments:

sukku said...

that was really brilliant yamm....

yaar how r u able to write these many poems....BTW whts the size of ur hard disk??? daily u r posting sumtng different and special...

my godd... starting a line with word which has ended in the previous one was really superbb...

i am dumbstruck dear...

keep rocking in ur place.......

Leo said...

yeah it was brilliant yammi, and loved it..! :)

i still will push u for more perfection though! because i know u can better it! :)

keep working bcoz ur poetry is becoming mindblowing day by day! :)

Phoenix said...

damn!! leo beat me to commenting yet again! god!! :D :P


i loved the last few lines.. just tell me yams.. what do u eat for breakfast that makes u deliver nothing but masterpieces each time???

yamini meduri said...

@sukku

thanks yaar...the credit of my poems goes to my little heart and a sweet friend...Vinay....!!!

they help me write...!!!

and Hard Disk...u know na..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Leo

thanks yaar....u are making me be better every day..!!!

thanks a ton...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Phoenix

thanks yaar...!!!

it ha nothing to do with the breakfast yaar....its about the wonderful friends i have..!!!

Hemanth Potluri said...

beautiful :)..

urs..hemu..

yamini meduri said...

@Hemanth

thanks dear..!!!

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

You are a born poet yamini...
sometimes i am speechless at your combination of thoughts, variety keeping the same baseline...
I was a little tied up and hence couldn't cope up with your blog..
this month really rocked....

Keep writing..:)

Vinz aka Vinu said...

Great..!!

Just loved the flow of the poem..!!
Amazing..

Keep wrinting..

:)

Pallav said...

sometime i always think.. tht how u can write ths..infact all
u write so beautifully tht i hv no words..
the way u express is awesome.
ur selection words, i mean everything is best...
cheers :)
Pallav

Chronicwriter said...

wonderfully written.. you are swimming eternally in a poetic friendly world

chriz

yamini meduri said...

@Mahesh

thanks yaar...thanks a ton..!!!

how are you friend?? nice to see you back again here..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Vinz

thanks yaar...will defly keep writing....please keep coming..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Pallav

thanks yaar...i write because of the world i live in...its full of wonderful people like you who always encourage me to write..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Chronic writer

thanks yaar.....i hope you are all swinging too..!!!

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Yeah that was really good..

Best friends are indeed always best than our siblings, parents sometime..:)

In this poem i loved the connectivity of all the stanza's ( correct me if stanza is right word )

Cheers..

yamini meduri said...

@Mahesh

thanks yaar...yeah you are right...they are all called stanzas too..!!

Jeevan said...

wow... its simple showcases you creative writing and it connects well!