The air you filled in
in the balloon of my life
life that was empty and dark
dark soul i turned to be
be it for any reason, i was there
there in the world alone, i wait
wait to see you, my friend
friend, you become my trait
trait i wish to share
share the joy and fun
fun of life, joy of heart
heart of happiness, you have spun
spun the threads of love
love thats special born in you
you are the real friend my dear
dear, you are the best out of the very few..!!!
in the balloon of my life
life that was empty and dark
dark soul i turned to be
be it for any reason, i was there
there in the world alone, i wait
wait to see you, my friend
friend, you become my trait
trait i wish to share
share the joy and fun
fun of life, joy of heart
heart of happiness, you have spun
spun the threads of love
love thats special born in you
you are the real friend my dear
dear, you are the best out of the very few..!!!
19 comments:
that was really brilliant yamm....
yaar how r u able to write these many poems....BTW whts the size of ur hard disk??? daily u r posting sumtng different and special...
my godd... starting a line with word which has ended in the previous one was really superbb...
i am dumbstruck dear...
keep rocking in ur place.......
yeah it was brilliant yammi, and loved it..! :)
i still will push u for more perfection though! because i know u can better it! :)
keep working bcoz ur poetry is becoming mindblowing day by day! :)
damn!! leo beat me to commenting yet again! god!! :D :P
i loved the last few lines.. just tell me yams.. what do u eat for breakfast that makes u deliver nothing but masterpieces each time???
@sukku
thanks yaar...the credit of my poems goes to my little heart and a sweet friend...Vinay....!!!
they help me write...!!!
and Hard Disk...u know na..!!!
@Leo
thanks yaar....u are making me be better every day..!!!
thanks a ton...!!!
@Phoenix
thanks yaar...!!!
it ha nothing to do with the breakfast yaar....its about the wonderful friends i have..!!!
beautiful :)..
urs..hemu..
@Hemanth
thanks dear..!!!
You are a born poet yamini...
sometimes i am speechless at your combination of thoughts, variety keeping the same baseline...
I was a little tied up and hence couldn't cope up with your blog..
this month really rocked....
Keep writing..:)
Great..!!
Just loved the flow of the poem..!!
Amazing..
Keep wrinting..
:)
sometime i always think.. tht how u can write ths..infact all
u write so beautifully tht i hv no words..
the way u express is awesome.
ur selection words, i mean everything is best...
cheers :)
Pallav
wonderfully written.. you are swimming eternally in a poetic friendly world
chriz
@Mahesh
thanks yaar...thanks a ton..!!!
how are you friend?? nice to see you back again here..!!!
@Vinz
thanks yaar...will defly keep writing....please keep coming..!!!
@Pallav
thanks yaar...i write because of the world i live in...its full of wonderful people like you who always encourage me to write..!!!
@Chronic writer
thanks yaar.....i hope you are all swinging too..!!!
Yeah that was really good..
Best friends are indeed always best than our siblings, parents sometime..:)
In this poem i loved the connectivity of all the stanza's ( correct me if stanza is right word )
Cheers..
@Mahesh
thanks yaar...yeah you are right...they are all called stanzas too..!!
wow... its simple showcases you creative writing and it connects well!
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