Apr 5, 2009

KIDZIE GANG...!!!



The days spent together
Were the beautiful ever
Leaving memories for today
The days then passed away

The hide and seek we played
The home work we did
The time spent in the tree’s shade
Memories flash back making me a kid

The paper boats left in the water tank
The icecreams from the kiddie bank
The toys we played with
Bring me the smiles very big

We were there for each other
Not just in happiness and laughter
But in tough times we had
That brought us sorrow, when we were sad

Childhood friends, my treasure
Being their friend, its my pleasure
The time spent is a memory now
Days passed, I still don’t know how..!!!

36 comments:

Hemanth Potluri said...

let me take the first place this time :)...

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

paper boats i so miss them....i still make them for the kids near to my home in the evening..:)...

it made my memories flash for a while yamini...childhood frdship has no ego's no backstabbing...just pure love...:)..so beautiful poem yamini...after so many days i am even first to comment :)...


urs..hemu..

Leo said...

super! brilliant! nostalgic read yammi! :)


wow... and loved the rhyme! i told u u can do it! a day is too long a gap inbetween ur posts! esp on friendship month!

too long a wait u kno!

Priya Joyce said...

as hemzii said i miss those paper boats too yaar..nice post made me nostalgic :(

sukku said...

ahhh!!!! yam u made me remember my childhood days dear.....

i miss those dasy terribly...:(...

but thru u again those memories are back in ma mind...

that wasss guddddd

ANWESA said...

wow!it reminded me of d naughtiest,whackiest yet funniest part of my life.gr8 goin yams!!

workhard said...

Hey thats a good poem....i like ' the icecream from the kiddie banks'

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Dhanya said...

Paper boats! :( You made me reminisce things...

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

ohhhhhh time. damn it flows so fast. :x :(


again a brilliant poem by brilliant yamini. time spend with friends r indeed treasures.

Mayz said...

**The paper boats left in the water tank
The icecreams from the kiddie bank

brilliant lines...jus sheer brilliance!!!

sawan said...

sweet yamini, took me back to my younger days :( miss tht age :(

Swetha Padakandla said...

u reminded me of those days whn life was so much fun!

and its well written, thnx for such a gud post which made me think abt those days!

cheers
swetha

Pallav said...

u reminded me my childhood
how innocent we were at tht time...

Harshita said...

I miss those days... :(

Chronicwriter said...

best days of our life

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AmitL said...

Hi,Yamini,
those were some nice lines-yep,memories of childhood friends and times spent together are amongst the best memories.

Jeevan said...

What to tell! Your brought back my childhood days and images rolling back to past. Very beautiful yamini, so as the lines are innocent and peace :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

beautiful and cute one this is...

I am very jealous at your this monthly theme poetry..

I am really very bad at poetry u know :p
i must learn a lot from u..

Cheers

yamini meduri said...

@Hemanth

congos first for being the first...after a long time..!!

very true childhood is the time when we are pure and perfect....i hope we were the same now too..!!

thanks a ton..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Leo

thanks yaar....i never knew that i can rhyme...but wen u told me that i can..i tried....now i know that i can rhyme too..!!!

**too long.!!!

i cant post twoce or thrice a day dear...so i am posting only once a day..!!!

but still...wait for post..waiting makes my post still more special to read..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Pj

thanks yaar....i am glad that u liked it..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Sukku

thanks yaar...aina nuvu miss avvatam enti?? nuvu inka chinna pillave kada...chinna pillalu kuda chinnapati life miss avutara??

yamini meduri said...

@Anwesa

thanks yaar....many more to come soon..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@workhard

thanks yaar...i like to have them now...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Paper boats

that was the reason of this post..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@PreetiLata

thanks yaar....thanks a ton..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Mayz

thanks yaar....thanks a ton..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Sawan

its ma pleasure...that i took u to years back....but i miss them too..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Swetha

thanks yaar....my pleasure..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Pallav

thanks yaar....!!!
yes, we were very innocent then...i wish we were the same even today...but yeah, not possible..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Harshita

i miss them too... :(

lets go back....aayegi??

yamini meduri said...

@Chronicwriter

yes, the best days of life....that is why they are not with us now...agree???

yamini meduri said...

@Amit

thanks yaar..!!!

i am glad that i brought back to u the best memories..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Jeevan

thanks yaar...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Mahesh

thanks yaar.....!!!

jealouus abt me>??? dont be..try n write some lines...you will make a good poem too...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Everyone

thanks a ton guys....i am really happy that my little piece took you to years back..!!!

those were the best days of life and it seems that everyone here accept that..!!!

thanks a ton once again..!!1