The days spent together
Were the beautiful ever
Leaving memories for today
The days then passed away
The hide and seek we played
The home work we did
The time spent in the tree’s shade
Memories flash back making me a kid
The paper boats left in the water tank
The icecreams from the kiddie bank
The toys we played with
Bring me the smiles very big
We were there for each other
Not just in happiness and laughter
But in tough times we had
That brought us sorrow, when we were sad
Childhood friends, my treasure
Being their friend, its my pleasure
The time spent is a memory now
Days passed, I still don’t know how..!!!
Were the beautiful ever
Leaving memories for today
The days then passed away
The hide and seek we played
The home work we did
The time spent in the tree’s shade
Memories flash back making me a kid
The paper boats left in the water tank
The icecreams from the kiddie bank
The toys we played with
Bring me the smiles very big
We were there for each other
Not just in happiness and laughter
But in tough times we had
That brought us sorrow, when we were sad
Childhood friends, my treasure
Being their friend, its my pleasure
The time spent is a memory now
Days passed, I still don’t know how..!!!
36 comments:
let me take the first place this time :)...
urs..hemu..
paper boats i so miss them....i still make them for the kids near to my home in the evening..:)...
it made my memories flash for a while yamini...childhood frdship has no ego's no backstabbing...just pure love...:)..so beautiful poem yamini...after so many days i am even first to comment :)...
urs..hemu..
super! brilliant! nostalgic read yammi! :)
wow... and loved the rhyme! i told u u can do it! a day is too long a gap inbetween ur posts! esp on friendship month!
too long a wait u kno!
as hemzii said i miss those paper boats too yaar..nice post made me nostalgic :(
ahhh!!!! yam u made me remember my childhood days dear.....
i miss those dasy terribly...:(...
but thru u again those memories are back in ma mind...
that wasss guddddd
wow!it reminded me of d naughtiest,whackiest yet funniest part of my life.gr8 goin yams!!
Hey thats a good poem....i like ' the icecream from the kiddie banks'
Haiku Poems
Paper boats! :( You made me reminisce things...
ohhhhhh time. damn it flows so fast. :x :(
again a brilliant poem by brilliant yamini. time spend with friends r indeed treasures.
**The paper boats left in the water tank
The icecreams from the kiddie bank
brilliant lines...jus sheer brilliance!!!
sweet yamini, took me back to my younger days :( miss tht age :(
u reminded me of those days whn life was so much fun!
and its well written, thnx for such a gud post which made me think abt those days!
cheers
swetha
u reminded me my childhood
how innocent we were at tht time...
I miss those days... :(
best days of our life
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Hi,Yamini,
those were some nice lines-yep,memories of childhood friends and times spent together are amongst the best memories.
What to tell! Your brought back my childhood days and images rolling back to past. Very beautiful yamini, so as the lines are innocent and peace :)
beautiful and cute one this is...
I am very jealous at your this monthly theme poetry..
I am really very bad at poetry u know :p
i must learn a lot from u..
Cheers
@Hemanth
congos first for being the first...after a long time..!!
very true childhood is the time when we are pure and perfect....i hope we were the same now too..!!
thanks a ton..!!!
@Leo
thanks yaar....i never knew that i can rhyme...but wen u told me that i can..i tried....now i know that i can rhyme too..!!!
**too long.!!!
i cant post twoce or thrice a day dear...so i am posting only once a day..!!!
but still...wait for post..waiting makes my post still more special to read..!!!
@Pj
thanks yaar....i am glad that u liked it..!!!
@Sukku
thanks yaar...aina nuvu miss avvatam enti?? nuvu inka chinna pillave kada...chinna pillalu kuda chinnapati life miss avutara??
@Anwesa
thanks yaar....many more to come soon..!!!
@workhard
thanks yaar...i like to have them now...!!!
@Paper boats
that was the reason of this post..!!!
@PreetiLata
thanks yaar....thanks a ton..!!!
@Mayz
thanks yaar....thanks a ton..!!!
@Sawan
its ma pleasure...that i took u to years back....but i miss them too..!!!
@Swetha
thanks yaar....my pleasure..!!!
@Pallav
thanks yaar....!!!
yes, we were very innocent then...i wish we were the same even today...but yeah, not possible..!!!
@Harshita
i miss them too... :(
lets go back....aayegi??
@Chronicwriter
yes, the best days of life....that is why they are not with us now...agree???
@Amit
thanks yaar..!!!
i am glad that i brought back to u the best memories..!!!
@Jeevan
thanks yaar...!!!
@Mahesh
thanks yaar.....!!!
jealouus abt me>??? dont be..try n write some lines...you will make a good poem too...!!!
@Everyone
thanks a ton guys....i am really happy that my little piece took you to years back..!!!
those were the best days of life and it seems that everyone here accept that..!!!
thanks a ton once again..!!1
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