waiting for the special time
time thats for sure there
there i stand, alone for you
you bring me life, i'm aware
aware of the life ahead with you
you are the truth i tend to live with
with the love you share
share a spark of hope that you lit
lit the lamp called life
life thats dark till date
date today will be forever
forever you changed my fate
fate i never believed in
in smiles or in tough time
time you brought to me, for it
it is special, so here is a toast of wine
wine of love and joy
joy of life with you my friend
friend of my little heart
heart's beat without you will end...!!!
a new form of poetry again....this form is called loop poetry....where the last word of a line is used to the start the next one...and the rhyming goes in ABCB order....and here goes my first attempt...i am not sure if its come out good....but then, i hope its fine...!!!
Let me know any kind of changes that i should do to it...or any kind of suggestion to improve it...every advice, every suggestion is accepted..not just for this one...for all the dreams seen in my Land Of Dreams..!!!
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