Apr 23, 2009

WHEN I WAS...!!!


when i was sad, you became my smile

when i was smiling, you are the reason
when i stumbled, you helped me walk
when i went dumb, you spoke my heart
when i was blind, you showed me the world
when i cried, you became the shoulder to lean on
when i needed an advice, you became my mentor
when i went wrong, you were there to correct
when i was to decide, you were the teacher i had
when i needed someone to cheer me up, you were there
when i needed the best friend, you were there

dear, can i ever be the friend like you...???

12 comments:

Priya Joyce said...

wow beautiful flow dear..lovely..

Phoenix said...

:)

great lines

Leo said...

no yammi, u cant be the friend like me...

because u are soooo much better! :)

lovely lines!

sukanya said...

yes u can be like that dear......

cozz u can get such a lovely frnd wen u r that lovelyyyy

am i right???

Dhanya said...

As usual, sweetness personified! :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

awesome :)..

urs..hemu..

sawan said...

ofcrse u can, u r a swthrt, u din know tht?? :)

Chronicwriter said...

that special friend

chriz

Devil Incarnate... said...

That was beautiful.. very sweetly written.

Pallav said...

Simple, sweet, n beautifully written...

Mayz said...

v can neva b like our frenz...they r d best :)

Jeevan said...

who can do better than a friend? it feels so nice being friends.