you shared my secrets, my joy
you listened my lies, my faults
you saw my triumphs, my fears
you are my strength, my weakness
you cheered me up, when i was low
you shared your shoulder, when i cried
you remained silent, when i spoke
you adviced me the best, when i needed
you identify my thoughts, the inner me
you understand my feelings, my little life
you spoke to my heart, my soul
you had faith in me, so did i
i love to be in this little world
of love, that you showed
never leave me here, to see the
world of sorrow and hatred
Dear friend, i admire your presence
in my little life, which you made special
Dont leave me here all alone
i fear i may not live anymore..!!!
you listened my lies, my faults
you saw my triumphs, my fears
you are my strength, my weakness
you cheered me up, when i was low
you shared your shoulder, when i cried
you remained silent, when i spoke
you adviced me the best, when i needed
you identify my thoughts, the inner me
you understand my feelings, my little life
you spoke to my heart, my soul
you had faith in me, so did i
i love to be in this little world
of love, that you showed
never leave me here, to see the
world of sorrow and hatred
Dear friend, i admire your presence
in my little life, which you made special
Dont leave me here all alone
i fear i may not live anymore..!!!
another poem done: Love you Dad..!!! check out..!!!
20 comments:
i wont leave u!
i think i would be dead if i ever left u friend! :)
ur so much more brilliant when u are not caged by format or style! it shows..! glad u still trying style though! :)
best was the third verse! :)
@Vinay
thanks yaar....i am free if i am nto with any style...so i prefer writing like that....!!!
but then...i want to try something new...so i try to rhyme...but its just getting better i guess.....agreed???
ayayoooo......
dont worry yam..... i dont leave uu....
cozz a small ghost cannot go alone without a big ghost... nd thats uu naa... so how can i leave uu????
hehehehehhehee
@sukku
hahaha....i will not leave you dont worry....i kow you a small kid..you cant walk alone with out someone big like me...!!!
so dont worry ok..!!!
i am not small kid ... :-|
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
u know i am a very big ghostttttt :)
@Sukku
nee bondha neeku antha scene ledu....lite teesuko..!!!
ninnu chooste chinna pillalu kuda bhayapadaru..nuvvu ghost enti??
anavasaram ga maa ghosts paruvu teeyamaka artham ayinda???
Your friends will alwaysss be there for you Yamz!! :) :)
friendship never leaves...i only know this ...:)..
urs..hemu..
@Dhanya
thanks dear...!!!
@Hemanth
thanks Dear....Friends also dont leave...i will prove this to u...!!!
dads are the best.. they are the best friend anyone can get
@Chirz
thanks dear....yeah u r right...!!!
Dads are the best and my dad is one such best friend..!!
Honestly speaking there r very few peopl who know meaning of friendship, i think people become friends to just have some favor from u...
this is beautiful...
n i wish no one...leaves.. u...n they shld not because u r such a lovely person..
intersting poem..which reminded me somethng...
hv fun ... cheers :)
Pallav
@Pallav
thanks yaar..!!!
u r true there are many who pretend to be friends but who actually expect something from us...i am glad that i dont have anyone like that...!!!
and the poem reminded u of something?? hope its something good and happy time..!!!
very nice :)
@V.Archana
thanks yaar....welcome back...we missed u..!!!
well.. u hv me here! :)
ammu.
@tulips
thanks yaar..!!
I love your admiration and i slow liked your way of expressing your incompleteness with out your friend...( friends i suppose )
Friends don't really leave na yamini... its the turns that life takes..makes this changes in life..:)
I liked this one too..:)
Cheers....
@Mahesh
thanks da..!!!
friends never leave...they are always at heart but then, we miss them.!!!
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