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On a dawn of cool breezes
As my alarm sings
I cuddle my teddy
To bunk college, I wish
During a boring class
As the sky pours down
Think to walk out
To go for a long walk, I wish
After a boring day
Beauty of twilight engulfs
Tired to do anything
A sizzling coffee, I wish
During the dark night
As the moon brightens
With something cooked
To have mom’s food, I wish
While my eyelids kiss
As my day ends
Smiling at the whole day
For another wonderful day, I wish
I cuddle my teddy
To bunk college, I wish
During a boring class
As the sky pours down
Think to walk out
To go for a long walk, I wish
After a boring day
Beauty of twilight engulfs
Tired to do anything
A sizzling coffee, I wish
During the dark night
As the moon brightens
With something cooked
To have mom’s food, I wish
While my eyelids kiss
As my day ends
Smiling at the whole day
For another wonderful day, I wish
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12 comments:
Hi Yamini;
You sound like my daughter when she got sick recently...wishing those things and so I have to travel to be with her to fulfill those wishes!
Lovely poem dear!
Nice and sweet
http://frescobyme.blogspot.com/2010/07/wish.html
Wow ! What a wish !...
I am mesmerized in this blog, good theme, good presentation, I just loved it..
I wish you a good luck for BATOM - 12
Saravana Kumar - Wish
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
@Amity
thanks yaar...i think this is wat everyone wants...dont you???
@Guddu
thank you friend....!!!
@Someone is special
thank you friend..thanks a ton..!!
How I wish, I could wish the same :)
Its those simple wishes in life that if come true bring the greatest joys to us :)
All the best for BAT!
@Mayur
thanks yaar...yeah true...the biggest joy of life is smallest wishes coming true..!!!
The greatest joys in life undoubtedly come from the little things-and you have portrayed that wonderfully in this short and crisp poem-leaves one with a wistful smile and a heart full of hope !
cute and nice one....small wishes but impacting wishes needed for everyone to keep the live going
What a refrshing poem.. simple things of life make a wonderful day, which trn into wndrful year nd wndrful life :)
Gr8 thoughts put in a very simple nd impressive manner.. keep participating :)
Amen to all the wishes!!
Wonderful expression :)
All the best for BAT-12.
Cheers :)
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