Once in the dawn, I stood
Near a pond, with two swans
Enjoying their place with love
The sun rays kissed my body
The spirit of Love smiled at me
Waking me up to see the beautiful tree
Branch of it sheltering someone
Dressed in white, face I couldn’t see
The flute he blew created an enigma
It touched my deep senses with a deep tranquil
Enthralled, started to step ahead towards him
Swans came together; I thought it was him and I
Birds began to sing; thought they were happy
Rejoicing the beauty I just saw, elating my move
The smile then was greater than before
When the birds’ song grew louder
Then I realized that it was all a dream
It was my Alarm and not the birds singing
The music woke me up to the reality
But I am still there, in my Land of Dreams...!!!
Near a pond, with two swans
Enjoying their place with love
The sun rays kissed my body
The spirit of Love smiled at me
Waking me up to see the beautiful tree
Branch of it sheltering someone
Dressed in white, face I couldn’t see
The flute he blew created an enigma
It touched my deep senses with a deep tranquil
Enthralled, started to step ahead towards him
Swans came together; I thought it was him and I
Birds began to sing; thought they were happy
Rejoicing the beauty I just saw, elating my move
The smile then was greater than before
When the birds’ song grew louder
Then I realized that it was all a dream
It was my Alarm and not the birds singing
The music woke me up to the reality
But I am still there, in my Land of Dreams...!!!
this poem is not just fantasy..it is my dream that i have been seeing in my Land of dreams from a long time. But i could never find who that person was sitting under the tree, blowing the flute(my favorite musical instrument) dressed in white( my favorite color) at such a beautiful place created by mother, NATURE. i hope i find my dream boy very soon and live the rest of life in his beautiful heart...!!!!
this is just a small attempt to explain my dream...but what my eyes saw and what my heart felt can never be written in words...!!!
21 comments:
a beautiful poem and equally cherished dream of urs..may u find ur dream soon..
beautiful :)..
urs..hemu..
You know, it is believed that dreams are like a bubble and most of times you are unable to remember them in morning! It must have been very very vivid:)
Beautiful description-I hope it come strue some day for you:)
aww :)
wow, in search of perfect love?? :P valentines day is nearing and seems like love is in the air already :P
thats so beautiful yam..........
i can know ur feleings....one day u will see him defly....dont worry yaar......defly u'll get dim......
well expressed and nice pic too
:)
Great poem
Nice way to express the feelings within the heart.
N I wish ur dream come true ASAP.
Regards
Satyajit
The dream seemed well cherished to me..and it was a beautiful image you put forth!...
B'ful! :)
@Anwesa
thank you dear....i hope the same too...!!!
@Hemanth
thank you dear...!!!
@Mithe
but to me my dream is never a bubble..it is something where happiness is in store...!!!
@Phoenix
:) :) :)
@Sawan
thank you dear....yeah..happy valentines day in advance..!!!
@Sukku
thank you dear....i hope the same too..!!!
@Aneesh
thank you dear..!!!
@Jaggernut
thanks alot Hr..i hope the same too..!!!
@Crystal
thank you dear...!!!!
sooooooooooo beautiful and sooooo romantic. i am awed by ur dream and ur writting skills.
my wishes are always there with u in every sphere of ur life. may he come soon to u. u knows he reaches to u thru ur land of dreams :)
@Preeti Lata
thank you dear....i am waiting for him too..!!!
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