you showed me happiness
you taught me beauty of life
you brought me every light
and now, dear sweet heart
you also brought me the pain
to that same little heart of mine
to which you taught what love meant
please come back not to see how i am
but to touch that little heart
where you are already there
to spread out the love that you own..!!
Hey friends....this is not written today..it was written for a comment in Vinay's blog. As I am a bit busy with the browsing of MBA colleges, i could not write something new. So, I thought i will post those lines that i wrote as a comment to many bloggers....!!! i hope you will like them too...!!!
Like the three liners, these also go into the category where i will post out those special lines that i wrote for the special bloggers in this blogger world....!!!
HAVE A GREAT TIME IN MY LAND OF DREAMS....!!!!!
you taught me beauty of life
you brought me every light
and now, dear sweet heart
you also brought me the pain
to that same little heart of mine
to which you taught what love meant
please come back not to see how i am
but to touch that little heart
where you are already there
to spread out the love that you own..!!
Hey friends....this is not written today..it was written for a comment in Vinay's blog. As I am a bit busy with the browsing of MBA colleges, i could not write something new. So, I thought i will post those lines that i wrote as a comment to many bloggers....!!! i hope you will like them too...!!!
Like the three liners, these also go into the category where i will post out those special lines that i wrote for the special bloggers in this blogger world....!!!
HAVE A GREAT TIME IN MY LAND OF DREAMS....!!!!!
29 comments:
hey i hope u find some worthwhile college soon :)
and good lines....
have a good sunday and week ahead Yams
well written yamini.
and all the best for your MBA.
all the best for mba
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could feel the irony....well written.
thats soo greatly written by uu yam.....
i hope u understand....i too misss alotttttt.......
hey you ll get a great college.. dont you worry@ and im game to read anything you write... they are all very beautiful!!
Hope you find a very good college soon........
about poem, words aren't enuf, very well structured
beautiful lines.. there is always emptiness when someone leaves.. takes time to fill it in, sometimes it doesnt work though..
goo luck with your searches :)
I sincerely wish you find a good MBA college soon.
Nice lines!
Tc
:)
:)..:D...all the best :)..
urs..hemu..
best of luck for the college hunt.... :)
and it is a wonderful poem... :)
oh u shud pick up ur comments from my blog...they r beautiful...esp d latest one!!!
beautiful lines, yet again :)
All the best with the college selection.
@Sam
thank you dear....thanks for those wishes...!!!
thank you..!!
@Sawan
thank you dear..!!!
thanks for the wish...!!!
@Chriz
thank you dear..!!
@pragnya
thank you dear...!!!
@Sukku
yeah i can understand and who do u think can understand you better than me???
thank you dear..!!!
@Phoenix
thank you dear..!!!!
thanks for wish...!!!
@Surya
thank you dear...!!!
@Lena
yeah ...you are true...there is always emptiness..!!!
thank you for the wishes...!!!
@Crystal
thank you dear..!!!
i hope the same too..!!!
@Pisku
thank you dear..!!!
@Hemanth
thank you dear..!!!
@The Day Dreamer
thank you dear..!!!
@Mayz
thank you dear...!!!
yeah will definitely write them too...!!!
thank you...!!!
@Harshita
thank you dear...!!!!
all the best with the college hunt...
i loved these lines...! :)
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