Jan 11, 2009

TWINGE OF A HEART..!!!

you showed me smiles
you showed me happiness
you taught me beauty of life
you brought me every light

and now, dear sweet heart
you also brought me the pain
to that same little heart of mine
to which you taught what love meant

please come back not to see how i am
but to touch that little heart
where you are already there
to spread out the love that you own..!!

Hey friends....this is not written today..it was written for a comment in Vinay's blog. As I am a bit busy with the browsing of MBA colleges, i could not write something new. So, I thought i will post those lines that i wrote as a comment to many bloggers....!!! i hope you will like them too...!!!
Like the three liners, these also go into the category where i will post out those special lines that i wrote for the special bloggers in this blogger world....!!!

HAVE A GREAT TIME IN MY LAND OF DREAMS....!!!!!

29 comments:

Sam said...

hey i hope u find some worthwhile college soon :)

and good lines....

have a good sunday and week ahead Yams

sawan said...

well written yamini.

and all the best for your MBA.

Chriz said...

all the best for mba

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Pragnya said...

could feel the irony....well written.

sukku said...

thats soo greatly written by uu yam.....

i hope u understand....i too misss alotttttt.......

Phoenix said...

hey you ll get a great college.. dont you worry@ and im game to read anything you write... they are all very beautiful!!

surya said...

Hope you find a very good college soon........

about poem, words aren't enuf, very well structured

Lena said...

beautiful lines.. there is always emptiness when someone leaves.. takes time to fill it in, sometimes it doesnt work though..

goo luck with your searches :)

CяystąL said...

I sincerely wish you find a good MBA college soon.
Nice lines!

Tc

pisku said...

:)

Hemanth Potluri said...

:)..:D...all the best :)..

urs..hemu..

τ ħ€ ĐάЎđяёάmёя said...

best of luck for the college hunt.... :)
and it is a wonderful poem... :)

mayz said...

oh u shud pick up ur comments from my blog...they r beautiful...esp d latest one!!!

Harshita said...

beautiful lines, yet again :)

All the best with the college selection.

yamini meduri said...

@Sam

thank you dear....thanks for those wishes...!!!

thank you..!!

yamini meduri said...

@Sawan

thank you dear..!!!

thanks for the wish...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Chriz

thank you dear..!!

yamini meduri said...

@pragnya

thank you dear...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Sukku

yeah i can understand and who do u think can understand you better than me???

thank you dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Phoenix

thank you dear..!!!!

thanks for wish...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Surya

thank you dear...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Lena

yeah ...you are true...there is always emptiness..!!!

thank you for the wishes...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Crystal

thank you dear..!!!

i hope the same too..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Pisku

thank you dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Hemanth

thank you dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@The Day Dreamer

thank you dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Mayz

thank you dear...!!!

yeah will definitely write them too...!!!

thank you...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Harshita

thank you dear...!!!!

Leo said...

all the best with the college hunt...

i loved these lines...! :)