A smile is what I always wished to take
It was my world, it was my life
But now it just changed to be a fake
Never knew it could turn into a knife
Wounding my heart, that’s sweet and little
Between mind and heart, creating a battle
Torn away from flesh, my heart stays life less
I search my soul, just waiting to confess
Waiting for a shoulder to lean on
For a lap that I can lie on
Everything seems to be shattered
Thought my dear ones will be flattered
Now, it is only the dear friends I have
Who are helping me live my life with love
I am happy to have them with me
As a shining star, myself I see
They hold me close again, once more
And now, tighter than ever before
With octaves, I have hope in my dreams
However lost, things may seem
Definitely my dreams will come true
With those good wishes, from their heart through
It was my world, it was my life
But now it just changed to be a fake
Never knew it could turn into a knife
Wounding my heart, that’s sweet and little
Between mind and heart, creating a battle
Torn away from flesh, my heart stays life less
I search my soul, just waiting to confess
Waiting for a shoulder to lean on
For a lap that I can lie on
Everything seems to be shattered
Thought my dear ones will be flattered
Now, it is only the dear friends I have
Who are helping me live my life with love
I am happy to have them with me
As a shining star, myself I see
They hold me close again, once more
And now, tighter than ever before
With octaves, I have hope in my dreams
However lost, things may seem
Definitely my dreams will come true
With those good wishes, from their heart through
***for those who dont know, OCTAVES is my gang name....they are my best friend....in fact everything i am today, is because of them. in the above pic....from left to right, it is Vijay, Karthik, Jitu, Chaitu, Chandu, Shashank, Sukku and Swathi....they are octaves of my life....they are the special notes of the music of my life...!!!***
23 comments:
hmm.. i can feel ur feelings yam...but dont worry this is all is a matter of just two or three months and everything will be alright with u....nyways we r always there only for u....dont listen to anything just listen to us and keep smiling all thru ur life...it gives alot many successes in ur future....
and dont ever think like this...octaves smile always..so u too keep smiling..nd u can see everything fine....
dont ever take away ur smile frm ur face..it looks so pretty on ur face..keep smiling all the days each nd every second ...we are always for u....we all luv uu yam...keep smiling........:):):)
whats the matter?anything wrong yam?
your composition reflected your sadness-hope everything is alright soon:)))
awwww wat happnd dear yams??
beautiful poem as always.
now cheer up dear. ups and downs will be there in life always. n thats where our inner strength and our true friends help us. c all ur friends r with u.
lucky u to have such frenz. long live octaves.
(((((yams)))))
yeah... u will be fine..! i can feel the poem! the sadness in it..! but with such a great gang, u will surely get over it soon!
long live octaves!
hey yamini...your poem on us simply touched my heart...i hope it touches evryone's heart...
A grt evening yam!!Honestly yam i didnt undesratnd the poem but can sense ur feelings!!Actually ur poem is abour my standards wich raised confusion.but one thing Ocatves are ocatve sonly with U!!gtr poem.Kepp smiling becozz ocatves likes u to sleep!take care!!have a grt life by22
yam nee life lo evaru vunna vundakapoina "octaves" life long vuntaru....adhi vallu happy ga matrame vundaru ninnu inka happy ga vunchutharu.....evaru emanna patinchukoku bcoz memu vunnamu netho. okka 3 months agithe ne life nee chethullo vuntundhi so neku ela kavali ante ala vundachu appudu so have a patience to enjoy ur life....ok na keep smiling...
hey y r u sad?
nice name for friendhsip.. musical
@Sukku
thank yiu dear...thank you for being there..!!!
kani you know my position and me too....i am unable to be the same old yamini...but am trying..!!!
@Mithe
nothin much.....bit depressed...may be i will be fne very soon...!!!
thank you dear..!!!
@PreetiLata
thanks alot dear....people like you help me bring my smile back....thanks a ton..!!!
@Leo
thank you vinay....i am glad for being a part of ma gang..!!!
thanks a ton..!!!
@Chaitu
thank you dear..!!
@Chandu
i dont know abt your confusion...but after reading your comment i got cinfused...!!!
@Tripura
thank you swathi...mee andaru unnaru kabte i am still there...leakpothe epudo out nenu..!!!
@Sam
yeah a bit..will be fine very soon..!!!
@Chriz
thank you dear...!!!
i hope ur ok now :)..
urs..hemu..
Gang..aha!!
Yamini is a gangstaa!! As always a beautiful piece of writing from you
@Hemanth
thank you dear..i am fine now...!!!
@Harshita
thank you dear...!!
:)
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