Jan 29, 2009

I WAS ABANDONED..!!!



I was abandoned, when I was there around
Left me on a dark road, of all answerless questions
Shedding tears in that stinging rain, when none can see
All alone, unfolding some sweet memories heaped in my heart

I was abandoned, when I was there around
Where my words were never measured, but

The words I heard, broke me into pieces
All alone, was knitting those pieces to be me all again

I was abandoned, when I was there around
Where my hard work went unrewarded
The exertion buried me in deep distress
All alone, was shedding tears which were never mine

I was abandoned, when I was there around
Trust ran far away from me, never seemed to look back
Confidence shot me to knees, ripping every sense
All alone, was struggling to stand in every walk of life

I was abandoned, when I was there around
Will soon be recalled, one day, by at least one
For my special presence, or my silly talks
All alone, will be there in some part of the world

For I lived all alone, through all the twists and turns
Balanced all the ups and downs, solved all the problems
I will be far away, hiding my face behind the tears
All alone, I will be there not around, but still alive

***this is not just fantasy, it is a situation that some one in the world is facing these days.....i think it is true that..."people recognize the specialty of our presence only when we are apart"...!!!but when thy do, it will be very late..!!!***

though this is not my kind of poem with that special kind of feel good point, please review it...coz, my heart felt it too...!!!!

32 comments:

Phoenix said...

oh!! i just wish i could show samik this post... he needs to know this

and im just speechless to say the least.. this post is amazingly beautiful and poignant too

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

its very very beautiful with the elements of sadness in it.

Sneha said...

I second Preetilata.
beautiful lines with the elements of sadness in it.

Chriz said...

i was abondened by myself too...

and great words
and a wonderful picture too..

mayz said...

ah beautifully written...no words to describe d pain in d post coupled wid d enigma n longin...thr is smthn so intriguin abt d words...

Meera said...

Beautiful is the one of the many lovely words that comes to my mind after reading this dear:)

surya said...

ooh!!! for a moment I sighed with relief at the end of the post,i thought it was ur feelings. By the way, a beautiful peom to express things which cant be expressed, an awesome work......

sukku said...

ohhhh......i dont have anywords to express abt ur post yam....

it's simplyy awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee.....
keep writing dear......

Cяystal said...

All elements beautifully weaved into one piece.

:)

Geetika said...

Lovely poem.
As u r aware, I am not regular at blogosphere from past few days but after hitting ur blog I think I was missed a lot!!
So many beautiful creations, amazingly written. :)

Geetika said...

Lovely poem.
As u r aware, I am not regular at blogosphere from past few days but after hitting ur blog I think I was missed a lot!!
So many beautiful creations, amazingly written. :)

Mithe said...

Hey, thats really really sensitive:)
So, you can write about every emotion in the same poignant manner-very impressive poem and all the best to the person this is dedicated to.
You have a caring heart-you always write so beautifully for others-keep up the good work!:)

The juggernaut said...

Hmmmm genious its another masterpiece from u.
But I will say that ur frnds are right by saying that the poem is quite a bit sad one.
Even I feel so.
:)

chandu said...

GRt yam!!was abondened by myself too...and great words
and a wonderful picture too..!!ah beautifully written...no words to describe d pain in d post coupled wid d enigma n longin...thr is smthn so intriguin abt d words...!!heart toucing yam .Keep it up!!

Matangi Mawley said...

Where my words were never measured, but
The words I heard, broke me into pieces
.........

loved the lines..

Harshita said...

Yes, I realised someone's importance when I lost him to destiny :) You are pretty right.

yamini meduri said...

@Phoenix

how i wish Samik reads it and never leaves you again..!!!

thanks alot dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@PreetiLata

thank you dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Sneha

thank you dear...!!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Chriz

thank you dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Mayank

thanks alot dear...i am glad that you liked it so much...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Meera

thank you dear...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Surya

thank you dear..!!!

by the way let me tell you..it can be me tooo who is referred to as "I" in the poem/...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Sukku
thank you dear....!!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Crystal

thank you..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Geetika

thank you dear...!!!!

keep visiting ..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Mithe

thank you dear...i am gald..!!!

let me tell you ..it can be for me too..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Jaggernut

thank you HR...!!!

i like my happy poems too..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Chandu

thak you ra...nuvu e janmaki maravu..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Matangi

thank you dear...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Harshita

thank you dear...!!!

surya said...

I hope its not you.....and would do my best to make my hope a reality....if i come to know, my hope isnt true