My dear country
For your beauty changing with seasons
I LOVE YOU...!!!
For your beauty changing with seasons
I LOVE YOU...!!!
HI FRIENDS...!!! this is my attempt on HAIKU for the first time. i think i got the idea right. and how did u all like it??? of any thing goes wrong and if it is not into the Haiku's Category, then its a mistake...!!!!
But if i am right.....then i have tried a lot of them....about love, about friendship, about life, about nature, about my special person, etc.. but pleae let me know if i am right or wrong...!!!
NOTE: from now on i am gonna post and comment with my name...yamini meduri...!!!
But if i am right.....then i have tried a lot of them....about love, about friendship, about life, about nature, about my special person, etc.. but pleae let me know if i am right or wrong...!!!
NOTE: from now on i am gonna post and comment with my name...yamini meduri...!!!
12 comments:
very nice tercet yamini...!!
simple and to the point...
liked it a lot..
sweet poem dear yamini.
but its not a haiku coz haiku have to be in 5-7-5 syllables. and it has to deal with nature.
urs is in 5-9-3
otherwise the poem is very sweet and to the point. loved it :)
give a try again :)
u simply rokk dear..u seem to luv india soo much and u hav soo soo much to rite abt it
and i admire u
tats good decision..i like ur name
btw I had told u bfore also
am telling ya agn
:P
my blog url now is
http://allabtpj.blogspot.com
AND NOT pjsexperiences
lovely riting...i cant be sure abt haikus ...i myself broke the rules :(...but it tells the love of country :)..
urs..hemu..
i loved the poem which is not quite a haiku, but a good first attempt :)
@Leo
thank you....!!!i am glad that you liked it...!!!
@Preeti Lata
thank you dear....and thanks about the info...
though they are not haiku..i have written some....i will post them soon after this INDIA month...!!!!
anyways thank you dear....!!!
@Priya Joyce
thank you dear....!!!!
i love my country alot and so i write...!!!
@Hemanth
thank you dear...i broke the rules too....dont worry i am there with you...!!!
@Lena
thank you dear....!!!!
Great! But I find haiku difficult too.Will try sometime...
@Mithe
thank you dear...!!!
all the best for your haiku ok....!!!
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