Dec 18, 2008

INDIAN HAIKU....!!!


My dear country

For your beauty changing with seasons

I LOVE YOU...!!!

HI FRIENDS...!!! this is my attempt on HAIKU for the first time. i think i got the idea right. and how did u all like it??? of any thing goes wrong and if it is not into the Haiku's Category, then its a mistake...!!!!

But if i am right.....then i have tried a lot of them....about love, about friendship, about life, about nature, about my special person, etc.. but pleae let me know if i am right or wrong...!!!

NOTE: from now on i am gonna post and comment with my name...yamini meduri...!!!

12 comments:

Leo said...

very nice tercet yamini...!!
simple and to the point...

liked it a lot..

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

sweet poem dear yamini.

but its not a haiku coz haiku have to be in 5-7-5 syllables. and it has to deal with nature.

urs is in 5-9-3

otherwise the poem is very sweet and to the point. loved it :)

give a try again :)

Priya Joyce said...

u simply rokk dear..u seem to luv india soo much and u hav soo soo much to rite abt it
and i admire u

tats good decision..i like ur name

btw I had told u bfore also
am telling ya agn
:P

my blog url now is

http://allabtpj.blogspot.com

AND NOT pjsexperiences

Hemanth Potluri said...

lovely riting...i cant be sure abt haikus ...i myself broke the rules :(...but it tells the love of country :)..

urs..hemu..

Lena said...

i loved the poem which is not quite a haiku, but a good first attempt :)

yamini meduri said...

@Leo

thank you....!!!i am glad that you liked it...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Preeti Lata

thank you dear....and thanks about the info...

though they are not haiku..i have written some....i will post them soon after this INDIA month...!!!!

anyways thank you dear....!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Priya Joyce

thank you dear....!!!!

i love my country alot and so i write...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Hemanth

thank you dear...i broke the rules too....dont worry i am there with you...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Lena

thank you dear....!!!!

Mithe said...

Great! But I find haiku difficult too.Will try sometime...

yamini meduri said...

@Mithe

thank you dear...!!!

all the best for your haiku ok....!!!