I am the little child on its journey
To every beauty that life can offer
In my most favorite place
That the precious time has taken me
I was that chilling snowflake In the beautiful Himalayas
I was that running water molecule In the sacred river of Ganga
I was the little rain drop In the beautiful Niligiris
I was that drop of sweat In the Chennai’s Golden Beach
I was the beautiful flower In the backwaters of Kerala
I was the green picture In the rich Araku Valley
I was the queen of hills in Simla
I was the queen of Valleys in Mussoorie
I was the glistening mountain in Darjeeling
I was the gorgeous scenery in Kodaikanal
I am the little child on its journey
To become more and most beautiful
I am your country, your India
On my way to celebrate my beauty…!!!
28 comments:
EEE DESH PYARA PYARA KISIKI NAZAR LAGEE ISAE!!!I AM INDIAN!!!
HAts off yam!!
hmm.....very grtttttttttt yam.......i dont have any words to express abt ur poetry.....INDIA is so grt to have u in this poetry world......
JAI HIND.....
EAST OR WEST YAMINI IN INDIA IS BEST.....
yup... all expressed beautifully from Kashmir to Kanyakumari!! :)
nicely done yamini!! :)
oh, and u have been awarded by me...!!
its in my Conjuring Kreativity blog... do visit...!! :)
these posts of urs r makin me fall in love wid my beautiful country all over again!!!
I liked the way you used 'I' in the poem.Itgives a sense of belongingness..doesn't it?
I have awarded you too-do visit my blog!
beautilful... thanks for empowering all indians.. :)
yamini.....i cant express any words no more...comments ur posts rock and i am proud to be ur friend :)..
urs..hemu..
Mmmm inspiring being an indian..
:)
very nice
this is a wonderful piece! Very well illustrated too.
hey... this is so nice.. i love it.
@Chandu
thank you dear...!!!
@Sukku
thank you dear...!!!
naku antha ledu le sukku...!!!
@Leo
thank you...!!!
@Leo
thank you dear..!!
i am glad for having recieved it....!!!
@Mayz
thank you dear....!!!
i am glad that you are loving the country again...i have gained my goal....!!!
@Mithe
thank you dear..!!!
the belongingness is important and so is this month to my country...!!
@Mithe
thank you dear...!!
i loved that award...but having recieved it the second time...its great...!!!
thank you dear...!!!
@Phoenix
thank you...!!! but i think thanks is not needed...its about our place...our country....!!
@Hemanth
thank you dear...!!!
i am glad that i am your frnd....and now am honored with these words...!!!
@Aneesh
thank you dear...!!!
@Joiedevivre
thank you dear...!!!
thanks for visiting my blog and keep visiting frnd...!!
@How do we know
thank you dear..!!
@Diya
thank you dear...!!
wowwwwww... this one is such a rich poem yamini. i am amazed by ur descriptive talent. loved it.
yes m proud og my motherlandd..proud to be an Indian.
jai hind:)
@Preetilata
thank you dear...!!!
i am proud to be an INDIAN too...!!!
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