As long as the sun glows
in the rays of life, lets live
sharing the same special bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as the breeze flows
feeling the fresh life, lets live
flowing in the real bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as the moon found
under the tender light, lets live
enjoying the sweet bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as the rains are seen
with every tiny droplet, lets live
tickling the chilling bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as the trees alive
with the greenery around, lets live
breathing the trusting bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long the stars shine
with the twinkling time, lets live
winking at the shining bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as we are alive
dear friend, forever lets live
smiling at the special bond
of love, of care, of everything...!!!
in the rays of life, lets live
sharing the same special bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as the breeze flows
feeling the fresh life, lets live
flowing in the real bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as the moon found
under the tender light, lets live
enjoying the sweet bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as the rains are seen
with every tiny droplet, lets live
tickling the chilling bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as the trees alive
with the greenery around, lets live
breathing the trusting bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long the stars shine
with the twinkling time, lets live
winking at the shining bond
of love, of care, of everything
As long as we are alive
dear friend, forever lets live
smiling at the special bond
of love, of care, of everything...!!!
16 comments:
heyy..again it turned out to b a wonderfull post as usual..luv the poet in u..which sumwhre rlly inspires me to scribble few..
keep going..!!!
@for u ...from me
thanks a ton yaar...am already waiting to read you dear...all the very best..!!
Hi Yamini,
Very nice, very very nice..:)
I'm of love, of care and of everything for you my dear..:)
wow.. this was more like a song than a poem yamii! loved it! :)
wow...very very nice dear...:)..loved it...wat form is this?:)..u have really touched my heart..
@Pramoda
Me too...Me toooo..!!!
Thanks yaar..!!!
coming off to pune..!!!
@Leo
thanks Vinay...so shall i try n tune it??? hahhaha..!!!
@Yellow tulip
its Yamini's form of poetry dear...My heart said it...my hand wrote it...!!!
hahaha....thanks a ton dear...!!!
Very nice one sis.....
kepp it up.....
Have done ur tag.....
check it out wen u r fre....
Hey thats a beautiful poem..
I felt as it its that song "As long as you love me" :p
Good one...
keep penning them down.
In all, i loved the last stanza more! very sweet indeed yamini :)
very beautiful one..:) It Rhymes a lot..!
@Dr.Kumar
thanks bro..!!! will be sure checking out ur tag..!!
@Jeevan
thanks dear...!!!
@Vyshu
thanks dear..!!
@Mahesh
thanks dear...i donno much abt the song..!!!
welcome back..!!
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