Falling down from heaven
Flowing to a side to pool up
Between you kiss my cheeks
Refresh all my lost senses
You are not the same to everyone
To some you are precious
To some you are a disaster
To me, you are my best friend
You bring me a sweet smile
You dont show off my tears
Your tinest form is a joy
Your presence I always Enjoy
You are an art, you are a song
You are a beauty, you are a charm
You are not often there
But still, you are special
Dear Rain Drop,
My heart falls open when I stand in you
I feel no sorrow I feel no pain,
I feel so complete when I am with you..!!!
Flowing to a side to pool up
Between you kiss my cheeks
Refresh all my lost senses
You are not the same to everyone
To some you are precious
To some you are a disaster
To me, you are my best friend
You bring me a sweet smile
You dont show off my tears
Your tinest form is a joy
Your presence I always Enjoy
You are an art, you are a song
You are a beauty, you are a charm
You are not often there
But still, you are special
Dear Rain Drop,
My heart falls open when I stand in you
I feel no sorrow I feel no pain,
I feel so complete when I am with you..!!!
24 comments:
me 1st aftr a long time.
feels so grttttt :p
me too loves rain.
beautiful poem with so much of rain essence in it.
1st stanza was awesome. :)
ah d rain beautifully described...its an amazin thing aint it...tears n smile...can b related to both...
sigh!!! m so hopin for rain in delhi its burnin here
wow..what a post just on onset of rain..cool huh..nicely expressed...
first time on ur blog .. but already in love with your writes !!
@PreetiLata
Congratulations dear....after a long time..u r first again..!!!
@PreetiLata
thanks a ton dear...Hope it rains now...!!!
@Mayz
Thanks yaar...Rain is the only form that relates to both smiles and tears...!!!
I hope it rains here too...its burning at Hyd too..!!!
That was beautiful! I love rain!
@Prajyot
thanks dear...!!! Hope it rains..!!!
@Pretty Me
Thanks yaar..!!!
Thanks for coming...!!!
Keep visit my Land Of Dreams and have a great time here..!!
@Bhargav
Thanks yaar..!!!
Thanks for visitin my Land of Dreams....keep cmoing ng have a great time..!!!
Hi Yamini u r damn good at poetry..... This poem abt rain is awesome..... I'll pray God to bring rain to ur place......
@Dr.Kumar
thanks yaar....i hope it rains here...its burning here very badly...!!!!
keep coming and have a great time in my Land of Dreams..!!!
Sure dear..... Will follow ur world.....
Nd I wanna contribute to The Gateway Of India..... How can I do so??
@Dr.Kumar
thanks yaar..!!!
Will let the admins know abt it ok...gimme ur mail...!!!
my mail id is rajkumar988@gmail.com
Thanx in advance yaar.....
@Dr.Kumar
never mind...will get to u soon..!!!
I loved this one :)
@Frozen
thanks Heena..!!!
Keep coming and have a great time in my Land of Dreams..!!!
nice poem yamini..
Simple words n sharp...
LOved the line...you dont show off my tears..
This is my first time visitin your blog...first of sooo many to come in future..
@ArunKumar
thanks Dear...!!!
U R welcome any number of time...have a nice time in my Land Of Dreams..!!!
yami, its quite lovely! esp. the first stanza!
hearing u say that u r not feeling pain or sorrow in the presence of a raindrop, i found myself wishing i was a raindrop!
:)
@Leo
thanks yaar...and all my friends and the world i am in are a different form of rain drops.....who wish i am happy always..!!!
you are one among them..!!!
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