May 17, 2009

YOU ARE AN ART...!!!


Falling down from heaven
Flowing to a side to pool up
Between you kiss my cheeks
Refresh all my lost senses

You are not the same to everyone
To some you are precious
To some you are a disaster
To me, you are my best friend

You bring me a sweet smile
You dont show off my tears
Your tinest form is a joy
Your presence I always Enjoy

You are an art, you are a song
You are a beauty, you are a charm
You are not often there
But still, you are special

Dear Rain Drop,
My heart falls open when I stand in you
I feel no sorrow I feel no pain,
I feel so complete when I am with you..!!!



24 comments:

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

me 1st aftr a long time.


feels so grttttt :p

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

me too loves rain.

beautiful poem with so much of rain essence in it.

1st stanza was awesome. :)

Mayz said...

ah d rain beautifully described...its an amazin thing aint it...tears n smile...can b related to both...

sigh!!! m so hopin for rain in delhi its burnin here

prajyot said...

wow..what a post just on onset of rain..cool huh..nicely expressed...

Pretty Me!! said...

first time on ur blog .. but already in love with your writes !!

yamini meduri said...

@PreetiLata

Congratulations dear....after a long time..u r first again..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@PreetiLata

thanks a ton dear...Hope it rains now...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Mayz

Thanks yaar...Rain is the only form that relates to both smiles and tears...!!!

I hope it rains here too...its burning at Hyd too..!!!

Bhargav Saikia said...

That was beautiful! I love rain!

yamini meduri said...

@Prajyot

thanks dear...!!! Hope it rains..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Pretty Me

Thanks yaar..!!!

Thanks for coming...!!!

Keep visit my Land Of Dreams and have a great time here..!!

yamini meduri said...

@Bhargav

Thanks yaar..!!!

Thanks for visitin my Land of Dreams....keep cmoing ng have a great time..!!!

Dr.Kumar said...

Hi Yamini u r damn good at poetry..... This poem abt rain is awesome..... I'll pray God to bring rain to ur place......

yamini meduri said...

@Dr.Kumar

thanks yaar....i hope it rains here...its burning here very badly...!!!!

keep coming and have a great time in my Land of Dreams..!!!

Dr.Kumar said...

Sure dear..... Will follow ur world.....
Nd I wanna contribute to The Gateway Of India..... How can I do so??

yamini meduri said...

@Dr.Kumar

thanks yaar..!!!

Will let the admins know abt it ok...gimme ur mail...!!!

Dr.Kumar said...

my mail id is rajkumar988@gmail.com

Thanx in advance yaar.....

yamini meduri said...

@Dr.Kumar

never mind...will get to u soon..!!!

.::FrOzEn::. said...

I loved this one :)

yamini meduri said...

@Frozen

thanks Heena..!!!

Keep coming and have a great time in my Land of Dreams..!!!

Arun Kumar said...

nice poem yamini..
Simple words n sharp...
LOved the line...you dont show off my tears..

This is my first time visitin your blog...first of sooo many to come in future..

yamini meduri said...

@ArunKumar

thanks Dear...!!!

U R welcome any number of time...have a nice time in my Land Of Dreams..!!!

Leo said...

yami, its quite lovely! esp. the first stanza!

hearing u say that u r not feeling pain or sorrow in the presence of a raindrop, i found myself wishing i was a raindrop!

:)

yamini meduri said...

@Leo
thanks yaar...and all my friends and the world i am in are a different form of rain drops.....who wish i am happy always..!!!

you are one among them..!!!