The wind whispers a silent tuneThe waves sing the rhythm of joy
The waters wet the soft sand
The foam touches my feet, my senses
The lighthouses, the seashells
The salty weather, the fisherman boats
The tall trees, the beauty around
Will the beauty be there for ever?
Along the endless shoreline
I wish i walk with him
hand in hand, just us around
With the birds flying above
Whishpers he can only hear
His fingers brush my hair
A world i see in his arms
I wish I live this day, some time
36 comments:
wow re, quite the romance! :)
hope u find him soon! :)
yay i am back to #1 commenter! :D
@Leo
thanks yaar..!!!i wish i find him soon too..!!!
@Leo
congrats yaar...!!! you are back.!!!
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......:) o! dream boy! u dont knw wat all u r missing. so come soon to her and dont miss out anything :P
gosh!! oni! hw cud u sit at myy chair huh? naughty bhai. :p
good post. Yamini, i have seen u everywhere but on my blog. no forcing though. if u have come across anythin abt me from somebody else, pls confirm first from my end and then take any decision (shunnin blog or nething)
you dont have a boy friend..? i doubt it yamini..:P
i cant really attempt like that..:)
Very good attempt...:)
Cheers
a mushy one !! simply sweet :)
loved the work!
m following ur blog dear!
regards
PULKIT'
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)
Awww... that's awfully sweet :) Hope you meet your dream guy soon yaar...
Hey Yaamini tat was a good dream....
Hope it comes true..... Very romantic it was..... Even i too get such dreams.....
A slight drizzling would elevate the romance more i think.... wat u say??
Keep rocking......
awwwwe, some one is being mushy mushy here :)
oops.. so romantic... aahhhh..
Pallav
@PreetiLata
thanks yaar....i wish he is reading...and come soon to me...i am waiting fo him..!!!
and dear...everyone cant be first..!!! hehehe.!!!
@Sam
thanks yaar..!!1
Nothing as such...somehow missed you...i am already there...chekc out..!!1
@Mahesh
i really dont have dear...I have a dream boy thats it...;)
I love him n he helps me write...!!!
Thanks buddy..!!!
@Pretty me
thanks yaar..!!!
@Pulkit
thanks bro..!!!
@Pulkit
thanks for following yaar..!!!
@Dhanya
thanks girl....hope your wish comes true soon..!!!
@Dr.Kumar
thanks yaar....write off ur dreams to...will love to read them..!!!
And abt the drizzling...yes, it makes the time perfect...but yaar, every time there willnot be rain..!!!
@Sawan
heheh...thanks buddy..!!!
**smiles**
@Pallav
thanks yaar.... ;)
**smiles**
wow Yams.. i pitured the whole thing.. so so so beautiful.. :)
@The PinkOrchid
thanks buddy..!!!
I closed my eyes after reading this and imagined it all... and it was so wonderful... :)
Completely romaanCHik ;)
Hi,Yamini-sorry,haven't been blogging too much lately-but,today,things are fine..ohh-what a lost of posts I missed..most interesting is the college last day one..:)I remember that day even now-when it was our last day at college- we couldn't think what to do next..hehe..:)But,yes,I miss school days more than college days-the real friends were there and we are still in touch.
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Lovely poem,this one..could almost imagine myself at a beach with a lighthouse at some distance..:)Something like in Enid Blyton books(Oh,how I miss them)..:) And,the answer is 'yes,the beauty will be there forever'..maybe a lil sullied by mankind.
@Harshita
thanks yaar...thanks a ton..!!
How was the scene???
@Amit
thanks yaar...thanks for coming back...!!!
Mis my college very badly yaar..!!!
how are you yaar???
where is he now?
nice one
chriz
@Chronicwriter
i dont know too....me waiting..!!!
me in a similar mood....
and hope someday u find him:P
:)
@Pj
thanks yaar..!!!
I wish you tell him soon..!!!
This is a beautiful feel, everyone come across in mind. I wish your wishes exists with someone u love soon :)
@Jeevan
thanks friend..!!!
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