May 7, 2009

I WILL BE THERE...!!!

Shared with you everything i had
the smiles, the toys, the tears, the joys
Held your hand, helped you walk
Lifted you up, when you fell

I wanted to give you the best always
Showered on you the love I had
When you just smiled the little smile
I saw the world filled with life

I wanted to show you the worlds best
I wished you get every little happiness
I tried to be always there with you
I hope i was there when you needed me

I now see, I am lost finding your smile
Which was never mine,
I was never the precious pearl to you
one which you are to me

I gave you my trust
you never took with heart
I loved you like none other
I now see, you never cared

I cried alone at nights
no one knows, except my soul
I wanted you to feel special
In the quest, i lost my'self'

But dear, anytime in life
if you are left alone
Just take the pain and turn back
your sister will definitely be there for you


LOVE YOU My LI'L SIS...!!!

30 comments:

Anonymous said...

ah yamii! such a passionate write!

direct dil se! i am sure ur sister loves u too! though she may be shy to say it! :)

loved this, told u na, its ur best yet! :)

Unknown said...

@Leo

may be u r right.,..i think i am going wrong abther...but lets hope for the best to happen...!!!

:)

Swetha Padakandla said...

wel written yamini.. :)
Having a sister is like having a best friend you can't get rid of. You know whatever you do, they'll still be there. :D

cheers
swetha

Hemanth Potluri said...

:D...good u rote abt sister so well :)...well i never have the chance to come first..:(..

urs..hemu..

Dhanya said...

Yamz, if your sis is younger to you... just give her some time. As a younger sister myself, I can tell you we do love our elder sisters a lot... but there comes a time when some distance is necessary :)

Chinni Meduri said...

hi yamu ....

im sure that u'll be shocked seeing my comment here...

never i read ur posts..
may be some magic made me to open ur blog...

surprised to see that the frst post is abt me...[:)]


love u darling...
i can feel ur love and care towards me in each and every word here...
a small thanks enough to u ....

thanku for this post


enjoy ur life
have fun
gonna miss u dear
love u

Lucifer said...

big sis's r so amazin...i feel so pampered when mine is around :)

again d feelings put out so beautifully!!

Unknown said...

i know dear that u luv ur sis alot...

anyone can know abt ur love towards her once they start talking to uu...

but u need to follow sumtngs dear regarding ur sis which we always suggest uu....

i hope they make sum sense...

though u r lucky to have her in some aspects....

u both rock meduri's family ....!!

nyways asusual the poem was awesome......

its rockinggggg

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Beautiful poem yamini...

I am glad my sister would like to dedicate the same for my little sister..:)

Of course my version will change as i am her brother..:)

I would love to see short stories coming out from you..try and let me know...:)

Cheers...

Priya Joyce said...

I so so loved it dear....u sis wud love to read it

and moreover..i also think she also would have lots aand lots to write about how sweet u r..:)

Anonymous said...

yamii!

i read ur sister's comment! and i can see she does love you too! i told u na! :)

whatever they may say to hurt u, or act as if they don't care, little sister's always will love their big siblings! :) they do! so don't take it to heart if it happens! ur love is there, and sooner or later, ur sister will return u double that love!

take care dear!

Sneha Shrivastava said...

Lovely poem for your sis.:)
You are a Ocean of words.
Claps for you.
Keep smiling & Stay happy.:)

prajyot said...

its really nice work..i will be there..!! such a key word in our lives

Me said...

aww... that was sweet...

I dont have a sister...adopt me...hehehe

Jeevan said...

A very sweet sister you're and i hope she loves you more (after reading her comment here), but sure this post would touch her heart to know how special she was to you.

Phoenix said...

ooooooooooooo i loved it!!

i dint know u had a sister...

Yamini Meduri said...

@Shwetha

thanks dear...Its not the same everytime and with everyone...!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Hemanth

Thanks yaar...where ever is ur place...your comment is always special....so never think abt the place...!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Dhanya

Thanks dear......will give her my life time to let her know how special she is to me...!!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Chinni

Baboi....ivala edo avutadi...!!!

Thanks for reading...thanks a ton..!!!

Love you Loads...!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Mayz

after reading ur comment...i feel proud to be a big sis..!!!

thanks Mayank..!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Sukku

thanks yaar....but u know i cant implement wat u all say all the time..!!!

I think i am fine like this..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Mahesh

thanks dear....you must a best bro to ur sis..!!!

and abt the stories, i do write them....i have another blog for them..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@PJ

thanks yaar...hope she really dos..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Leo

thanks yaar...i already told you how am i feeling now....do ineed to say it again???

Yamini Meduri said...

@Sneha

thanks a ton dear...!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Prajyot

thanks yaar...!!! I will be there for sure....be it for family...be it for friends..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Jeevan

thanks yaar...!!!

She IS indeed very special to me..!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Phoenix

thanks yaar..!!!

There never came a situation wen we spoke abt her..!!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@EVeryone

sorry for being late..!!!