Shared with you everything i had
the smiles, the toys, the tears, the joys
Held your hand, helped you walk
Lifted you up, when you fell
I wanted to give you the best always
Showered on you the love I had
When you just smiled the little smile
I saw the world filled with life
I wanted to show you the worlds best
I wished you get every little happiness
I tried to be always there with you
I hope i was there when you needed me
I now see, I am lost finding your smile
Which was never mine,
I was never the precious pearl to you
one which you are to me
I gave you my trust
you never took with heart
I loved you like none other
I now see, you never cared
I cried alone at nights
no one knows, except my soul
I wanted you to feel special
In the quest, i lost my'self'
But dear, anytime in life
if you are left alone
Just take the pain and turn back
your sister will definitely be there for you
LOVE YOU My LI'L SIS...!!!
30 comments:
ah yamii! such a passionate write!
direct dil se! i am sure ur sister loves u too! though she may be shy to say it! :)
loved this, told u na, its ur best yet! :)
@Leo
may be u r right.,..i think i am going wrong abther...but lets hope for the best to happen...!!!
:)
wel written yamini.. :)
Having a sister is like having a best friend you can't get rid of. You know whatever you do, they'll still be there. :D
cheers
swetha
:D...good u rote abt sister so well :)...well i never have the chance to come first..:(..
urs..hemu..
Yamz, if your sis is younger to you... just give her some time. As a younger sister myself, I can tell you we do love our elder sisters a lot... but there comes a time when some distance is necessary :)
hi yamu ....
im sure that u'll be shocked seeing my comment here...
never i read ur posts..
may be some magic made me to open ur blog...
surprised to see that the frst post is abt me...[:)]
love u darling...
i can feel ur love and care towards me in each and every word here...
a small thanks enough to u ....
thanku for this post
enjoy ur life
have fun
gonna miss u dear
love u
big sis's r so amazin...i feel so pampered when mine is around :)
again d feelings put out so beautifully!!
i know dear that u luv ur sis alot...
anyone can know abt ur love towards her once they start talking to uu...
but u need to follow sumtngs dear regarding ur sis which we always suggest uu....
i hope they make sum sense...
though u r lucky to have her in some aspects....
u both rock meduri's family ....!!
nyways asusual the poem was awesome......
its rockinggggg
Beautiful poem yamini...
I am glad my sister would like to dedicate the same for my little sister..:)
Of course my version will change as i am her brother..:)
I would love to see short stories coming out from you..try and let me know...:)
Cheers...
I so so loved it dear....u sis wud love to read it
and moreover..i also think she also would have lots aand lots to write about how sweet u r..:)
yamii!
i read ur sister's comment! and i can see she does love you too! i told u na! :)
whatever they may say to hurt u, or act as if they don't care, little sister's always will love their big siblings! :) they do! so don't take it to heart if it happens! ur love is there, and sooner or later, ur sister will return u double that love!
take care dear!
Lovely poem for your sis.:)
You are a Ocean of words.
Claps for you.
Keep smiling & Stay happy.:)
its really nice work..i will be there..!! such a key word in our lives
aww... that was sweet...
I dont have a sister...adopt me...hehehe
A very sweet sister you're and i hope she loves you more (after reading her comment here), but sure this post would touch her heart to know how special she was to you.
ooooooooooooo i loved it!!
i dint know u had a sister...
@Shwetha
thanks dear...Its not the same everytime and with everyone...!!!
@Hemanth
Thanks yaar...where ever is ur place...your comment is always special....so never think abt the place...!!!
@Dhanya
Thanks dear......will give her my life time to let her know how special she is to me...!!!!
@Chinni
Baboi....ivala edo avutadi...!!!
Thanks for reading...thanks a ton..!!!
Love you Loads...!!!
@Mayz
after reading ur comment...i feel proud to be a big sis..!!!
thanks Mayank..!!
@Sukku
thanks yaar....but u know i cant implement wat u all say all the time..!!!
I think i am fine like this..!!!
@Mahesh
thanks dear....you must a best bro to ur sis..!!!
and abt the stories, i do write them....i have another blog for them..!!!
@PJ
thanks yaar...hope she really dos..!!!
@Leo
thanks yaar...i already told you how am i feeling now....do ineed to say it again???
@Sneha
thanks a ton dear...!!!
@Prajyot
thanks yaar...!!! I will be there for sure....be it for family...be it for friends..!!!
@Jeevan
thanks yaar...!!!
She IS indeed very special to me..!!
@Phoenix
thanks yaar..!!!
There never came a situation wen we spoke abt her..!!!!
@EVeryone
sorry for being late..!!!
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