Sep 6, 2009

FAMISHED...!!!


For a cup of rice
All the time I wait
Mud at last I eat
In the garbage
Search will I, for food
Having not found
Everyday I wait for
Death that doesn't come

shared at: Acrostic Only..!!!

13 comments:

Being Pramoda... said...

Hey Yamini,

U r back with ur kind of stuff, ummm..i love to read u in this particular corner..

It touched me alott..yeah, its happening..:(..

How do we know said...

Hey Yam.. this is really really nice!!!

for u..from me said...

heyy...dis is rlly nicely written, i mean its apt n ya touchy at the same time..!!!

Dhanya said...

Yamz... you're just getting better. This one was a lil different from your usual work... but as hard hitting as ever!

Ria said...

that was really nice!

Yellow Tulip said...

very touching post dear:(..very sad it happens dear:(...

Leo said...

aww.. so sad.. the awareness post speacialist u r! i was touched! its soo sad! :(

Amias said...

you touched my very soul with this one .. how true, and yes, sad indeed. Why? Oh Why is this so?

Amias said...

By the way, you wrote this in September and therefore it must be posted on the September link.

I am so glad you posted it either way ... you young folks really are a bunch of wonderful human being.

Missy said...

A subject that rendered this mothers heart with sadness, there should be no hunger.

Arun Kumar said...

so sad n so painful... yet so true...
nice write...

Leo said...

sigh... u r super smiley! heartfelt write as usual!

Amias said...

I am so in awe of your humanity, especially in one so young. Congratulations you are a winner!

Go HERE to see how your work was presented and pick up your awards! You might need to scan down to your name or look on archive and click on the prompt title.