Nov 5, 2009

STRUGGLE TO SMILE...!!!


She is beautiful
she should be
I made her so
with love, with care

I painted her
chose sweet pink
with the purest heart
I brought her to life

With the soft feather
I designed her smile
With the angels around
I sent her to that world

She is torn today, into pieces
with the culture of the land
her beauty is hidden
under that dark heavy fabric

Her perfection lost
with the torment
of the male world
she is swollen red

She died everyday
living for a new dawn
she mourned her life
still smiling for the world..!!!

This is dedicated to those women of the world who are covered from the world with the heavy traditional fabric, who are harassed by the male world, who have no right to live, who are deprived by their religion, who cry day in and day out, struggling to live with a wish to die...!!! I only wish that one day they live like us, a better life..!!!

I am really very sorry if had hurt your feelings and personal perspectives...!!!

10 comments:

Creativity!! said...

Yamini, I Am First To Comment :) :) :) :) :)

Very Well Said :) :) I Too Join Your Sayings :) :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

how bad can it be....nice wording's yamini...u have brought up the social cause in ur poem...i am with u in spreading the word...

urs..hemu..

Amias said...

Yamini I so agree with with you, and what's so bad about it they do it to please men who dresses very comfortably.

Bravo!

How do we know said...

this is GOOD Yam.. really really gud... i love the empathy that u bring to the world.. always keep the love in ur heart that way..

yamini meduri said...

@Creativity

thanks dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Hemanth

thanks hemanth....wish to see them live a better life..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Amias

yeah...thats the worst part..!!!

nyways thanks di..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@How do we know

thanks dear...dont worry i will never leave the love ihave for everyone in the world..!!!

tulipspeaks said...

I am not sure if their religion deprive them of their freedom. Usually the loss of freedom is caused by religious fanatics!

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