Nov 21, 2008

FREEDOM...HUH NO CHANCE...!!!


The drop of rain was all free
Before it fell into the shell
The whole world was shut
But it turned into a beautiful pearl

It was happy when it was taken out
When it was made free again
But then we wove them with the thread
Purging all the freedom again

It wants to be free
But it can never be

The same is life too

We were free as a soul
Before we dropped in our mother’s womb
Everything was dark there
But still we took a beautiful shape

We thought we were free
When we first stepped into this world
But we are tied in the knots of societal affairs
And so we are never free from then

We want to be free
But we can never be

22 comments:

sukku said...

y couldn't we be free........
y do pepole supress us with their feelings and beliefs.....
we too have our own personal feelings but when will they understand that.......
the thought came to u was right yam...i feel the same....but had ntng to do just to live this freedomless life...

ANWESA said...

it was lovely n i luvd d analogy..
we r born free but in chains,everywhere..

tripura said...

yamini chla bahgdundhi.....inka rayali nuvu ilantivi inka different ga......ok na all the best

Mithe said...

Well, how true but how apt!

mayz said...

ahhhh i jus fell in love wid this post...

Hemanth Potluri said...

soo..its finally good to read ur post :)....nice posts i have missed yami ...good to read them all :)...

urs..hemu..

POTLURI said...

Wow nice poetry... g8.. Thanks for posting and keep it up..

Phoenix said...

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BTW BEAUTIFUL WORDS THERE :)

tulipspeaks said...

well.. being social animals, we can never be free!


ammu.

Sam said...

lovely poem :)

U like me addin u up :)

dilmainhainpyar said...

@sukku

this is for people like us dear...u now knew na the relatin between pearls and our life???

good...an thanx

dilmainhainpyar said...

@anwesa

thanq dear..n u r very true...al the chains but they say we are all free

dilmainhainpyar said...

@tripura

thanq swathi

dilmainhainpyar said...

@mithe
thanq

dilmainhainpyar said...

@mayz

thanq dear

dilmainhainpyar said...

@hemanth

thanq dear....good to se you back

dilmainhainpyar said...

@potluri

thanq prudhvi....

dilmainhainpyar said...

@phoenix
thanq dear..i am glad for having recieved your award

thanx alot

dilmainhainpyar said...

@tulips

thanq dear...you r true that we can never be freee

dilmainhainpyar said...

@sam

thanq dear....thanx for visitng my blog...keep visiting

Aneesh said...

we can be free, our mind can be free, if we want. Though we may be bind by physical means, our mind can fly wherever we want and can see what we want
:0

dil ki pyar said...

@aneesh

you are true that we can fly anywhere with our minds and i say that is why we blog to let our hearts feel its own way and help our mind think about everything

thanq