with the rays of sun
falling on my cheeks
falling on my cheeks
my minds jumps with fun
with your memories in heaps
The fresh bean of coffee
brings you beside me
every sip that i taste
is a hug from you mate
the rose i buy
makes me feel high
every look at its beauty
brought you to me Cutie
Every thought has you
Every moment was new
I searched you every where
and you were always there
walking in the beach
the world was out of reach
the water was a chill
but brought me the happiness pill
i found a new world
when i was tight in your arms
the air around was cold
but i was feeling warm
when i realized that I LOVE YOU
i was eager to tell you
Suddenly, I heard a scream
Alas!!...all this is just a DREAM....!!!!
20 comments:
good dream to have no..:)
CUTEEE yam!!!!cuter peom than U!!veryyy awesome feeling!!I HAD ONLY 1 FELEING THIS PEOM THAT Y DNT I HAVE A GF WITH THIS TYPE OF FEELINGS?????but superb yam.keep it up!!
wow such a nice poem... i loved it yamini :)
hi yamini......superb poem entha manchi feeling ante vuhaki kuda andhatam ledhu....ee poem chadhivithe
eppatiki nizam avuthundho anipisthundhi.....excellent yamini
haaaa veryyyyyyy grt one yam.........chala chalaaaaaaaaaa bagundhi naku words kuda dorakatlehdu express cheyadnaiki...its just simply superb.........it touched yaarrrr..........very niceeeeeeeeeeee post by uuuuuuuuu..............
yamini, that was so positive! wonderful write up.. loved to be here..
well ..:D...awesome...is a word i am using all the time should move to marvelous :)....i think u got it :)..
urs..hemu..
nice yaar :)
Great Poem
Just liked the simplicity of it.
N really a fresh one. The feeling of love is well converted in to words.
Waiting for some more like this one.
aah just a dream? but a good one. you must have woken with a smile.
@kiran
yeah a really good one.....
@chandu
you will defly get some like this girl tooo
@phoenix
thanq dear
@tripura
thanq swathi...avuthundi le swathi....may be maa andarikante neeke mundu avuthundi emole
@sukku
thanq dear
@sawan
thanq frnd...
thanx for visiting my blog.....keep visiting...
@hemanth
thanq dear
@archana
thanq dear
@jaggernut
thanq HR...was waiting for u frm a long time.....
@kiran
thanq dear...defly have woken with a smile and anyone who have dreamt this wud wake up with a smile only na
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