Nov 7, 2008

ALAS...!!!I ITS A DREAM.....


with the rays of sun
falling on my cheeks
my minds jumps with fun
with your memories in heaps

The fresh bean of coffee
brings you beside me
every sip that i taste
is a hug from you mate

the rose i buy
makes me feel high
every look at its beauty
brought you to me Cutie

Every thought has you
Every moment was new
I searched you every where
and you were always there

walking in the beach
the world was out of reach
the water was a chill
but brought me the happiness pill

i found a new world
when i was tight in your arms
the air around was cold
but i was feeling warm

when i realized that I LOVE YOU
i was eager to tell you
Suddenly, I heard a scream
Alas!!...all this is just a DREAM....!!!!


20 comments:

kiran said...

good dream to have no..:)

chandu said...

CUTEEE yam!!!!cuter peom than U!!veryyy awesome feeling!!I HAD ONLY 1 FELEING THIS PEOM THAT Y DNT I HAVE A GF WITH THIS TYPE OF FEELINGS?????but superb yam.keep it up!!

Phoenix said...

wow such a nice poem... i loved it yamini :)

tripura said...

hi yamini......superb poem entha manchi feeling ante vuhaki kuda andhatam ledhu....ee poem chadhivithe
eppatiki nizam avuthundho anipisthundhi.....excellent yamini

sukku said...

haaaa veryyyyyyy grt one yam.........chala chalaaaaaaaaaa bagundhi naku words kuda dorakatlehdu express cheyadnaiki...its just simply superb.........it touched yaarrrr..........very niceeeeeeeeeeee post by uuuuuuuuu..............

sawan said...

yamini, that was so positive! wonderful write up.. loved to be here..

Hemanth Potluri said...

well ..:D...awesome...is a word i am using all the time should move to marvelous :)....i think u got it :)..

urs..hemu..

V. Archana said...

nice yaar :)

The juggernaut said...

Great Poem
Just liked the simplicity of it.
N really a fresh one. The feeling of love is well converted in to words.
Waiting for some more like this one.

Kiran Sawhney said...

aah just a dream? but a good one. you must have woken with a smile.

yamini meduri said...

@kiran

yeah a really good one.....

yamini meduri said...

@chandu

you will defly get some like this girl tooo

yamini meduri said...

@phoenix

thanq dear

yamini meduri said...

@tripura
thanq swathi...avuthundi le swathi....may be maa andarikante neeke mundu avuthundi emole

yamini meduri said...

@sukku
thanq dear

yamini meduri said...

@sawan
thanq frnd...
thanx for visiting my blog.....keep visiting...

yamini meduri said...

@hemanth

thanq dear

yamini meduri said...

@archana

thanq dear

yamini meduri said...

@jaggernut

thanq HR...was waiting for u frm a long time.....

yamini meduri said...

@kiran

thanq dear...defly have woken with a smile and anyone who have dreamt this wud wake up with a smile only na