People are dying
of hunger, of thirst
little children now seen
begging on the streets
The tired little souls
sleep hungry at night
never knowing if again
they would see light
Doesn't the regime
have the cognizance
of the dying world?
Will it ever understand?
Lets join hands
to help those little hands
to eat, to study, to play
and definitely not to Beg
Written for One Single Impression...!!!
18 comments:
a very important thing to be cognizant of... good job with the prompt...
hmm.. it felt like a prosaic piece written in verse, rather than a poem..
i applaud ur effort dear, but it is not one of ur best i felt.
@Leo
thank you yaar...even i felt the same..this poem is some how its incomplete..!!!
this is one social problem we should be cognizant with!
nice poem dear!
Wow..amazig blend of the concept with the prompt ..As leo said , i too felt this is more of a verse than poem ..but still you brought this socia evil very well !:)
Well said indeed! There's something we all can do, everyday, to help those kids out there, and its good to be reminded lest we may forget!
@Amity
thank you dear..!!
@Adreamgal
thank you dear...yeah i told already na...even i felt something is missing in the poem..!!
@Ayushi
thank you dear..Yeah rightly said, we can do everything that can help them live a better life...but we dont thats the problem...we just say...we dont act..!!
Anyways thank you dear...thanks for visiting my Land of Dreams..!!!
Keep visiting..!!
If only cognizance would lead to compassion!
@Amity
thank you friend...!!!
@adreamygal
thank you friend..!!
@Sandy
thank you friend...!!thanks for visiting my land of dreams....keep coming...hope you have a great time here...!!
A gentle reminder for those who have little cognizance! Lovely work!
Thank you for reminding us of this critical social issue.
Yamini--you have a good heart. Your poem says so. Now what to do about insensitive regimes...
Good wishes.
@Tumble words
Thank you dear...!!!
Welcome to my Land of Dreams...Keep coming..may you have a great time..!!
@Loch Rob
thank you friend...my pleasure...hope you will forget the seriousness of the situation again...!!!
Welcome to my Land of Dreams..Keep coming and hope you have a great time..!!!
@Carles Gesmundo
Thank you dear...!!
We should work together to help those little souls live better..!!!
Welcome to my Land of Dreams..Keep coming and hope you have a great time..!!!
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