In the storm Stands the white rose tumultuous waves of destruction abound her Yet tall is the white rose strong in the face Of the sensed doom around her And she does not bow down Pure is the white rose In the compost earth growing eternal strength in the nights that so hurt I see not the white rose She is so far away But I long to protect her But only the words can I say So I send her my words And my poets heart To help her when there is hope to see her through Be Strong little flower Your heart will guide true And as long as you want I will always be there for you There are a few in life who touch your heart and become indispensable to you. there are a few who make you believe in angels and for me that someone is you. She is the poet with a golden heart, warm and affable; she fills me up with a sense of peace and calm and encourages me to smile through my tears. she is the ultimate friend anyone can ever find. Here's wishing you many more posts, keeping penning and touching our lives. wishing you a fulfilling and enriching blog experience, for all times to come and do offer me such opportunities of trying my hand at poetry.(lol) |
Jun 1, 2009
White Rose
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19 comments:
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww :) the poem was awesome.. group hug with raka and yams :)
well done my frnd/wifey!!!u indeed can drive ppl crazy(wid ur poems)..lol..no offence meant :)
watsay yams?
Absolutely wooooooow! =)
Love the last paragraph, and the whole thing on a white rose..an ultimate fave..gorgeous!
wow awesome poetry :)..
urs..hemu..
so nice and true lines... it seems like a guest post, nice beginning.
Phoenix...
thanks a ton dear...sorry for being late...but i am really very happy seeing your post..!!!
Me and a white rose...??? wow...you know?? White is ma fav color...!!! thanks for starting my celebrations with my fav rose..!!!
and the poem...wow....i should learn from you abt how to write ...you are so good yaar..!!
thanks a ton for stating my celebrations fabulously..!!!
:D im so happy yams that you and everyone else liked it.. i had a torrid time writing it but then it is all worth it :)
here is wishing you nothing but the best in life.. and an onward march to a bright future...
lots of love
*HUGS*
awww such a cute dedication raka...yeah yamini rocks...she is one of d most talented ppl arnd...n d best part is she dsnt boast abt it...dsnt bother abt d no of comments etc...she writes coz she wants to n that makes me wanna read her posts even more :)
LOved it... the simplicity and the beauty in the words
beautiful. :)
@The Pink Orchid
thanks Kajal...!!! yeah i too loved the poem...its superb..!!!
@Anwesa
Agreed Dear...she is awesome Poetess...!!!
@Crystal
thanks dear...!!!
ur words will defly reach Raka..!!!
@Hemanth
Credit goes to Raka..!!
@Jeevan
Yeah it is a guest post dear...good that u liked it..!!!
@Mayz
thanks yaar....I am thankful to all of you that i am being loved, and the comments doesnt really matter...!!!
@DewDrop
thanks dear..!!!
@PrretiLata
thanks girl..!!!
very sweet !!
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