Jun 1, 2009

White Rose



In the storm
Stands the white rose
tumultuous waves
of destruction abound her

Yet tall is the white rose
strong in the face
Of the sensed doom around her
And she does not bow down

Pure is the white rose
In the compost earth
growing eternal strength
in the nights that so hurt

I see not the white rose
She is so far away
But I long to protect her
But only the words can I say

So I send her my words
And my poets heart
To help her when
there is hope to see her through

Be Strong little flower
Your heart will guide true
And as long as you want
I will always be there for you

There are a few in life who touch your heart and become indispensable to you. there are a few who make you believe in angels and for me that someone is you.

She is the poet with a golden heart, warm and affable; she fills me up with a sense of peace and calm and encourages me to smile through my tears. she is the ultimate friend anyone can ever find.

Here's wishing you many more posts, keeping penning and touching our lives. wishing you a fulfilling and enriching blog experience, for all times to come and do offer me such opportunities of trying my hand at poetry.(lol)


19 comments:

The Pink Orchid said...

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww :) the poem was awesome.. group hug with raka and yams :)

ANWESA said...

well done my frnd/wifey!!!u indeed can drive ppl crazy(wid ur poems)..lol..no offence meant :)

watsay yams?

Cяystal said...

Absolutely wooooooow! =)
Love the last paragraph, and the whole thing on a white rose..an ultimate fave..gorgeous!

Hemanth Potluri said...

wow awesome poetry :)..

urs..hemu..

Jeevan said...

so nice and true lines... it seems like a guest post, nice beginning.

yamini meduri said...

Phoenix...

thanks a ton dear...sorry for being late...but i am really very happy seeing your post..!!!

Me and a white rose...??? wow...you know?? White is ma fav color...!!! thanks for starting my celebrations with my fav rose..!!!

and the poem...wow....i should learn from you abt how to write ...you are so good yaar..!!

thanks a ton for stating my celebrations fabulously..!!!

Phoenix said...

:D im so happy yams that you and everyone else liked it.. i had a torrid time writing it but then it is all worth it :)

here is wishing you nothing but the best in life.. and an onward march to a bright future...
lots of love

*HUGS*

Mayz said...

awww such a cute dedication raka...yeah yamini rocks...she is one of d most talented ppl arnd...n d best part is she dsnt boast abt it...dsnt bother abt d no of comments etc...she writes coz she wants to n that makes me wanna read her posts even more :)

Dewdrop said...

LOved it... the simplicity and the beauty in the words

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

beautiful. :)

yamini meduri said...

@The Pink Orchid

thanks Kajal...!!! yeah i too loved the poem...its superb..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Anwesa

Agreed Dear...she is awesome Poetess...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Crystal

thanks dear...!!!
ur words will defly reach Raka..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Hemanth

Credit goes to Raka..!!

yamini meduri said...

@Jeevan

Yeah it is a guest post dear...good that u liked it..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Mayz

thanks yaar....I am thankful to all of you that i am being loved, and the comments doesnt really matter...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@DewDrop

thanks dear..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@PrretiLata

thanks girl..!!!

Pretty Me!! said...

very sweet !!