Oct 26, 2008

PAIN OF MA HEART...!!!!



water sliding down my cheeks, each drop

makes me weaker, what is this

am i weak or am i in grief???

these tears wont stop falling.

my cheeks are salty,

and my eyes are red,

so much pain i never felt.


cry a million tears,

cry away a thousand years

thatt wont take the pain away

it stays with me all thro my life


i ahve the apin for loosing my friends

i am sobbing all the night under the sheets

being careful not to be known to anyone

and my heart bears all the pain


every tear that i shed

dropped into a river of them

and was makin no difference


i am not alone

just another person

i am just another falling tear....

lost forever in this flowing river....!!!


20 comments:

Hemanth Potluri said...

wonderful poem yamini...it touched the flowing of life wen the sadness is filled in with it :)...wow..awesome piece :)..

urs..hemu..

Vinay said...

loved it...loved it...!!
awesome...my perspective of a tear, was a bit different, considering it was related to romance...
but like hemmzy says...it really touches one's heart...

dilmainhainpyar said...

@hemu
thanq yaar......

dilmainhainpyar said...

@vinay
thanq frnd.....tears have really lost their significance..ppl think we shed tears only when we broke up with someone in our life...
but this is not the thing yaar... tears are actually the way we show the world he pain our heart feels
anyways thanx

Diya said...

hey wonderful lines to xpress ur sadness. i liked it yaar..

V. Archana said...

nice though a sad one..

Manish Raj said...

Hi

You write very well Yamini..

It's first time, I have come to your blog. Could not resist commenting.

sukku said...

hmm gud poemmm yamini
me tho speechlessss......
but veryy guddd onee.......

lukkydivz said...

Hiding under the sheets... thats something i do all night!

lol

good to see a hyderabadi here ;)

dilmainhainpyar said...

@diya

thanq dear

dilmainhainpyar said...

@archana

thanq archana.....i think u r a bit late this time

thanx though

dilmainhainpyar said...

@manish raj

thanq frnd... keep visiting ma blog

dilmainhainpyar said...

@sukku

thanq dear

dilmainhainpyar said...

@lukkydivz

thanq dear.... so we have something in common

Eesha Duggal said...

i am just another falling tear....

lost forever in this flowing river....!!!

Wow, i loved this line!!!

dilmainhainpyar said...

@eesha

thanq dear..... i loved it too and every other line aswell

badri said...

Itz really good yamini i touched the heart buddy i liked and loved it a lot.............

dilmainhainpyar said...

@badri

thanq sruthi...thanx for the comment dear

The juggernaut said...

Wow great one genious.
Really a touchy one.

dilmainhainpyar said...

@jaggernut
thanq yaar...i was waiting to read ur comments for my posts......

thanq