water sliding down my cheeks, each drop
makes me weaker, what is this
am i weak or am i in grief???
these tears wont stop falling.
my cheeks are salty,
and my eyes are red,
so much pain i never felt.
cry a million tears,
cry away a thousand years
thatt wont take the pain away
it stays with me all thro my life
i ahve the apin for loosing my friends
i am sobbing all the night under the sheets
being careful not to be known to anyone
and my heart bears all the pain
every tear that i shed
dropped into a river of them
and was makin no difference
i am not alone
just another person
i am just another falling tear....
lost forever in this flowing river....!!!
20 comments:
wonderful poem yamini...it touched the flowing of life wen the sadness is filled in with it :)...wow..awesome piece :)..
urs..hemu..
loved it...loved it...!!
awesome...my perspective of a tear, was a bit different, considering it was related to romance...
but like hemmzy says...it really touches one's heart...
@hemu
thanq yaar......
@vinay
thanq frnd.....tears have really lost their significance..ppl think we shed tears only when we broke up with someone in our life...
but this is not the thing yaar... tears are actually the way we show the world he pain our heart feels
anyways thanx
hey wonderful lines to xpress ur sadness. i liked it yaar..
nice though a sad one..
Hi
You write very well Yamini..
It's first time, I have come to your blog. Could not resist commenting.
hmm gud poemmm yamini
me tho speechlessss......
but veryy guddd onee.......
Hiding under the sheets... thats something i do all night!
lol
good to see a hyderabadi here ;)
@diya
thanq dear
@archana
thanq archana.....i think u r a bit late this time
thanx though
@manish raj
thanq frnd... keep visiting ma blog
@sukku
thanq dear
@lukkydivz
thanq dear.... so we have something in common
i am just another falling tear....
lost forever in this flowing river....!!!
Wow, i loved this line!!!
@eesha
thanq dear..... i loved it too and every other line aswell
Itz really good yamini i touched the heart buddy i liked and loved it a lot.............
@badri
thanq sruthi...thanx for the comment dear
Wow great one genious.
Really a touchy one.
@jaggernut
thanq yaar...i was waiting to read ur comments for my posts......
thanq
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