Oct 4, 2008

I FEEL LIKE...!!!


I feel like flying in the sky

I feel like swimming in the water

I feel like running after the deer

I feel like singing with the cuckoo

I feel like jumping on the bed

I am happy for no reason

I feel the completeness of the heart

I feel the chillness of the mind

I can just say “I AM HAPPY”

I hope I should be happy always

I wish you are happy as I am

Because your smile brings me

Sunshine long before it reaches the sky.


LOVE YOU FRIEND

I AM HAPPY TO HAVE YOU…!!!

21 comments:

vijay bhargav said...

hmm good poem yamini!! u being happy i don`t mean like u r perfect but i mean u have decieded to look beyond imperfections!! keep rocking

chandu said...

hmm good poeam raa mottu!!!being happy i don`t mean like u r perfect but i mean u have decieded to look beyond imperfections!! keep smiling!!

jitu said...

this 1 is really nice 1 yam.... im happy for ur happiness...n now i can also say "I M HAPPY"...thanq for giving me happiness....so always be happy... !!!

Hemanth Potluri said...

gud one yamini ..:).and who is that frnd in the poem ur happy abt :)..

urs..hemu..

sukku said...

hmmm a very nice poem yamini....
superbbbbb yaarrr

i'm happy bcozz u r happyyyyyyyy

nyways nice post yaarrrrr

aku_blur said...

thanks for your comment!!!
It was just like an hour after the post.... and I already got a comment... didn't expect that...
best regards!!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

simple one...neat one..!!

what i liked in this post is that, i frequent many poet's blogs...most of them are filled of agonies, brutality, terror, negativism, lost hopes, lost faith, blah blah blah...
but in this one..i just saw someone beaming in happiness...and thats what appealed to me..

well done..!!

The juggernaut said...

Hey genious u always stay happy its my wish.
Its the best way to fullfill ur life.
N nice poem yaar.
I m waiting for some more good poems like this one.

Erin Mascarinas said...

Thank you for commenting on my blogs. I will do the same to yours.

I enjoyed reading your poem. :)

david santos said...

Really great poem.
Good inspiration.
Have a nice week.

prajyot said...

very nicely written yamini..

gr8 goign...!!

dilmainhainpyar said...

@vijay
i am out of words after ur comment and so have nothing to say abt it.

but just a "thank you"

dilmainhainpyar said...

@chandu
comment kuda copy na?????
anyways thanx for the copied comment

dilmainhainpyar said...

@jitu
i am happy because u r happy
u be happy and i will be happy

dilmainhainpyar said...

@hemu
i happy for every one of u who are special in ma life

dilmainhainpyar said...

@sukku
same here too
v r happy as u r happy

dilmainhainpyar said...

@aku blur

thanx for visiting me

dilmainhainpyar said...

@vinz aka vinu

thanq yaar
i read n wrote many poems about the pains in ma life and also abt happiness.....
i love tpo be smiling always and so i am here with this poem hat u liked and i am gald that there are people who appreciate happiness

dilmainhainpyar said...

@ jaggernut
thanq as always...ur comment made me happy

dilmainhainpyar said...

@erin
thanq

dilmainhainpyar said...

@prajyot
thanq yaar