I wait to see your smile
As it makes me happy
I am standing in a crowded room
Yet I am feeling alone as I don’t find u there
I am picking my phone now and then
Yet I don’t see any call from you
I see you every where around me
Yet I find it difficult to know that it is not you
I think I will end up my life
But never let you know about my LOVE
But I am feared to miss you forever
I can feel the emptiness without u in my life
I hope I will get rid of this loneliness someday
When I take my last breath
For now I have to deal with it
I just wish to scream and say
“I LOVE YOU”, “I LOVE YOU”, AND “I LOVE YOU”…!!!
As it makes me happy
I am standing in a crowded room
Yet I am feeling alone as I don’t find u there
I am picking my phone now and then
Yet I don’t see any call from you
I see you every where around me
Yet I find it difficult to know that it is not you
I think I will end up my life
But never let you know about my LOVE
But I am feared to miss you forever
I can feel the emptiness without u in my life
I hope I will get rid of this loneliness someday
When I take my last breath
For now I have to deal with it
I just wish to scream and say
“I LOVE YOU”, “I LOVE YOU”, AND “I LOVE YOU”…!!!
15 comments:
hmm.. a longing feeling..
thats sweet!! :)
heyy yamini
i dont know how u said thiss
but u know sumthngg really this touches heart
actually i feel the same somtimess
but yaar really thats grtt yaar
Mottu superaaaa!!!excellent!!!!i never expected that ur soo romatic and have feeli9ng about love!!!but anyways all the best for anythingg u so!!!!and nice sayinggggg'ss!!
hmmmmmm i tought dat u can do dis job
nd
i was shocked by seeing urfeelings on love .........
nd tanx 4 gifting me dis poem
realy ur gr8 poet 4 ever yar ......
u can rock dis country vid ur poems ...
yamini...its simply excellent.
but nizam cheppu yamini intha manchi feelings neeku ela vasthayi...
naku koncham cheppavu nenu practice chestha...plz...ok na
A lover writes a love letter....
A fearless person writes a suicide note.....
A lawyer writes a promisory note...
but
only a one side lover can write such lines....its very impressive...
hope you get your one very soon....
@ archana
thanks for visiting ma blog and feel glad that u liked it
@ sukku
i know how much this post touched you
all da best dude
@chandu
even i didnt know that i can write this way
@da life (shashi)
it was written for you yaar. u asked me to write about it so that u cna gift it to ur gf and i am glad to hear there was a positive esponse for it
@tripura
hi swathi
cheppagalithe and nuvu nerchukogaligithe nenu tappakunda neeku chepii nerpistanu ok na
@appu
chaitu ga
this is for u ra...may ur appu listen to ur feeling and acept ur love
me waiting to see u together
@ yamini
really yamini it touches my heart
and thanks for ur wishes yaar
Hey genious
Sorry for this late post.
Nice one yaar n very touchy.
But who is the other genious, haan?????
;) Just jokin
U have felt the love correctly n nicely interpret in ur poem.
@jaggernut
i am stil sarching him yaar
hope i get him very soon
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