Sep 18, 2008

I LOVE YOU...!!!


I wait to see your smile
As it makes me happy
I am standing in a crowded room
Yet I am feeling alone as I don’t find u there
I am picking my phone now and then
Yet I don’t see any call from you
I see you every where around me
Yet I find it difficult to know that it is not you

I think I will end up my life
But never let you know about my LOVE
But I am feared to miss you forever
I can feel the emptiness without u in my life
I hope I will get rid of this loneliness someday
When I take my last breath
For now I have to deal with it
I just wish to scream and say
“I LOVE YOU”, “I LOVE YOU”, AND “I LOVE YOU”…!!!

15 comments:

V. Archana said...

hmm.. a longing feeling..
thats sweet!! :)

sukku said...

heyy yamini
i dont know how u said thiss
but u know sumthngg really this touches heart
actually i feel the same somtimess
but yaar really thats grtt yaar

chandu said...

Mottu superaaaa!!!excellent!!!!i never expected that ur soo romatic and have feeli9ng about love!!!but anyways all the best for anythingg u so!!!!and nice sayinggggg'ss!!

DA LIFE I VANT 2 ACHIVE said...

hmmmmmm i tought dat u can do dis job
nd
i was shocked by seeing urfeelings on love .........

nd tanx 4 gifting me dis poem
realy ur gr8 poet 4 ever yar ......
u can rock dis country vid ur poems ...

tripura said...

yamini...its simply excellent.
but nizam cheppu yamini intha manchi feelings neeku ela vasthayi...
naku koncham cheppavu nenu practice chestha...plz...ok na

appu said...

A lover writes a love letter....
A fearless person writes a suicide note.....
A lawyer writes a promisory note...

but

only a one side lover can write such lines....its very impressive...

hope you get your one very soon....

dilmainhainpyar said...

@ archana
thanks for visiting ma blog and feel glad that u liked it

dilmainhainpyar said...

@ sukku
i know how much this post touched you
all da best dude

dilmainhainpyar said...

@chandu
even i didnt know that i can write this way

dilmainhainpyar said...

@da life (shashi)

it was written for you yaar. u asked me to write about it so that u cna gift it to ur gf and i am glad to hear there was a positive esponse for it

dilmainhainpyar said...

@tripura

hi swathi
cheppagalithe and nuvu nerchukogaligithe nenu tappakunda neeku chepii nerpistanu ok na

dilmainhainpyar said...

@appu
chaitu ga
this is for u ra...may ur appu listen to ur feeling and acept ur love

me waiting to see u together

sukku said...

@ yamini
really yamini it touches my heart
and thanks for ur wishes yaar

The juggernaut said...

Hey genious
Sorry for this late post.
Nice one yaar n very touchy.
But who is the other genious, haan?????
;) Just jokin
U have felt the love correctly n nicely interpret in ur poem.

dilmainhainpyar said...

@jaggernut

i am stil sarching him yaar
hope i get him very soon