Fine tune of the cool breeze
Dancing waves across the seas
Little shells in the sands
Green trees on the lands
Enjoying the twilight
And the little sky light
Winking at the moon
Expecting a little boon
I wait there, alone
To just hear a tone
Saying "I Love You"
Which I actually want to
Dancing waves across the seas
Little shells in the sands
Green trees on the lands
Enjoying the twilight
And the little sky light
Winking at the moon
Expecting a little boon
I wait there, alone
To just hear a tone
Saying "I Love You"
Which I actually want to
22 comments:
My heart says It's beautiful!!
Stuck the right chord with me this one..
Good one dear:)
Cheers:)
@jaunty anima
Hello friend...thank you dear..!!!
thanks for visiting my Land of Dreams...and keep coming dear..!!!
Hiiii ...:)
Sooooo romantic...:) heheh .. hope ur dream would come true soon..:)
woww..dear..so luvly...njoyed a lott..:)
@Prams
thanks di...!!!
@Mads
thanks dear..!!
Love... aah...
beautiful feeling....
very well written...
hey is that a pic from goa?
@Pallav
thanks dear..!!!
@Prajyot
The pic is from Google dear...hehehehe...must be from Goa only...!!!
Really romantic Yamz! :) Happy new year!
thats so sweet and beautiful!! :)
Happy New Year, Yamini :)
@Dhanya
thanks Dear...wish you the same..!!!
Welcome back..!!
@Lena
thanks dear...wish you the same..!!!
welcome back..!!!
glad to see such a beautiful post :)..
urs..hemu..
hoz u been yamini :)..
urs..hemu..
Hi,Yamini-tks for ur comment on Inspirations..:)A Very Happy New Year to you too...and,hey,give us some prose,too- prose as in 'non-poetry post'..always good to read your views.
@hemanth
thanks dear..!!!
wish you the same..!!
@Hemanth
i am fine dear..how abt you???
@Amit
thanks dear...will write prose too defly..!!!
nice message of the poem and beautiful rhymes too!!
wonderful Yamini, i love it!
@amity me
thank you dear..!!!
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