Jul 29, 2009

MISSING OCTAVES....!!!


As I stand alone
Watching the world around
Flashed my mind
The memories of time behind

The time spent with octaves
Was immersed in the joyous waves
The bond we shared
Is still loved and cared

I remember the time spent

Regularly at the canteen we went
Days went on, when we never knew
After four years, its still fresh and new

I miss my gang, my octaves
Trying to move with the life’s rays
But still, miss their presence
The bond we share, is the essence



14 comments:

Pramoda Meduri said...

hiiii dear....

Soo nicely said ...
Every line is touching :)

I'm wondering about the rhyming, beautifull dear..

Creativity!! said...

Hi Dear :)

Woww!!!!!! Simply Beautiful :) very Heart Touching with Eye-catching Phrases :)

Vyshu said...

Hii..:)

Very touching..!


I've been an admirer of ur poems..:)

Take care..

yamini meduri said...

@Pramoda

thanks dear...!!! i love to rhyme..but then, every time its not possible...!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Creativity

thanks dear....welcome to my Land Of Dreams..!!!

Keep visiting and have a great time..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Vyshu

thanks dear...thanks a ton..!!!

I am honored..!!

tulipspeaks said...

nicely written, dear.


ammu.

sukku said...

hmm.... yaa yam we never know how it wld be after our colz...

but bow missing all of them alot....

jus two days left for me to mis them for other 2 or 3 years....

miss u allll octaves....

Jeevan said...

loved the last verse dear. time will come soon and you catchup the missing joy.

yamini meduri said...

@Tulips

thanks dear..!!

yamini meduri said...

@Sukku

missing u a lot dear...!!!

All the very best for your future dear..!!

yamini meduri said...

@Jeevan

thanks dear...thank you...!!!

Phoenix said...

aww :(

i miss home and samik

yamini meduri said...

@Phoenix

miss home too dear..!!!

Welcome back.....was missin you here..!!