As I stand alone
Watching the world around
Flashed my mind
The memories of time behind
The time spent with octaves
Was immersed in the joyous waves
The bond we shared
Is still loved and cared
I remember the time spent
Regularly at the canteen we went
Days went on, when we never knew
After four years, its still fresh and new
I miss my gang, my octaves
Trying to move with the life’s rays
But still, miss their presence
The bond we share, is the essence
Watching the world around
Flashed my mind
The memories of time behind
The time spent with octaves
Was immersed in the joyous waves
The bond we shared
Is still loved and cared
I remember the time spent
Regularly at the canteen we went
Days went on, when we never knew
After four years, its still fresh and new
I miss my gang, my octaves
Trying to move with the life’s rays
But still, miss their presence
The bond we share, is the essence
14 comments:
hiiii dear....
Soo nicely said ...
Every line is touching :)
I'm wondering about the rhyming, beautifull dear..
Hi Dear :)
Woww!!!!!! Simply Beautiful :) very Heart Touching with Eye-catching Phrases :)
Hii..:)
Very touching..!
I've been an admirer of ur poems..:)
Take care..
@Pramoda
thanks dear...!!! i love to rhyme..but then, every time its not possible...!!!
@Creativity
thanks dear....welcome to my Land Of Dreams..!!!
Keep visiting and have a great time..!!!
@Vyshu
thanks dear...thanks a ton..!!!
I am honored..!!
nicely written, dear.
ammu.
hmm.... yaa yam we never know how it wld be after our colz...
but bow missing all of them alot....
jus two days left for me to mis them for other 2 or 3 years....
miss u allll octaves....
loved the last verse dear. time will come soon and you catchup the missing joy.
@Tulips
thanks dear..!!
@Sukku
missing u a lot dear...!!!
All the very best for your future dear..!!
@Jeevan
thanks dear...thank you...!!!
aww :(
i miss home and samik
@Phoenix
miss home too dear..!!!
Welcome back.....was missin you here..!!
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